ok, i am officially in love with this couple!!

This is briliant but i was wondering if i might could know your name so i could email you.

Oh my goodness. This is FANTASTIC! I am a recent convert to E/R slash and you are amazing! You made my day! How you keep the violence between them is so wonderful. Bravo!

Sometimes, it seems they need to be alone, but fear that asking for that time alone means asking the other person to leave...without a promise they'll come back.

So what is Raoul fighting in his dreams?

Oh, wow

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS...PLEASE!

You totaslly should, it would be AMAZING

Lol! Poor Raoul, if only he could lie still. Though, if Erik teases him like that then maybe it's not too bad! :)

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I'd like to see what fun things Erik will do to make Raoul realize he's serious about what ever it is they have hehehhehehehe

I love this story (I love ALL your Phantom stories) and I really hope you continue with it! It's hard to find good slash (especially Phantom Erik/Raoul slash) and you write fantastic slash.
You truly are an amazing writer, as I can perfectly picture the characters doing these things in my head.
Please do continue!
BTW it amused me too. XD

So there's something really amusing about the idea that Erik just gave Raoul a hicky. A HICKY! Yeesh!

And also I laughed at the idea of Raoul kicking Erik off the bad. *snerk*

oh this looks promising. I'll be keeping an eye on this story

This is one form of relationship I can really see between Erik and Raoul, the violent, almost abusing, tension and dominance with rebellion. It made me grin to read and it would be a extremely interesting story to read in comparison to other ones. I would certainly say continue this one or start another that fallows the same tone. (Perhaps a series of these kind of scenes would be good so each one can be read separately and you and fans are not left with cliffhangers or unsatisfying endings.)

Lovely, as always.

~OP~

haha! this made me laugh so much b/c at the beginning of the fic I was like wtf? are they together or not? so when you wrote : "Raoul moved a lot when he was asleep, as though he was still fighting and struggling with Erik even when he wasn’t aware of it. It had been a surprise the first time Raoul had slept in Erik’s bed when he’d woken as Raoul kicked him off it. By now the few times that Raoul did sleep over, Erik expected the assault."

I was like: they had a sleepover? ugh! I'm so tired! Cute ficlet! I pity these two boys. Stupid Raoul! NOTHING IS WRONG WITH THEM!

Oh, that could so go on to be continued, but I do love it as a ficlet. :)
Great job, I love the way you can make even the smallest fic have a plot.

I just had to smirk at:
Raoul muttered, “And I don’t even think she’s singing better.”
“What does that even have to do…?” Erik almost yelled but caught himself.
Nice to know that in the middle of defending himself from a damning accusation, Erik's pride still rears up in defense of his musical skills.
BTW, this would be cute as a mini story if you wanted to add on a couple more chapters, just don't neglect the hospital drama - I'm waiting on an update!