Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Lactose Intolerant
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-10-15 . chapter 7
No problem. Take your time.

Keep the good writing.
ttfantt
2009-06-24 . chapter 6
awsome chapter
Xviera Siramad
2009-06-24 . chapter 6
I couldn't hep, but smile when the 3 Warners got to hug eachother. and also when Yakko was ooking at the doctors. XD Well, I guess it's not that bad for him now. XD Anyways, good job and keep up the good work! :D
Yoly
2009-06-24 . chapter 6
LOL I was giggling the whole time when Yakko was checking out the doctor. I'm pretty sure he gonna be just fine. Especially with to beautiful doctors. ^-^
Suomanona . Onzwald
2009-06-20 . chapter 5
i just have to write a few more paragraphs in Cpt 3 Prt 2 and then i can upload it into this! YAY!
oh and the reason i havent been writing much is number 1 and 2 in the author's note thingy
ttfantt
2009-06-19 . chapter 5
PLEASE UPDATE!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-06-10 . chapter 5
Okay, take your time.

Keep the good writing.
Yoly
2009-06-09 . chapter 4
Aw so cute. This is not something you see often so I like it. It a cute take on the Warners relationship when one is seriously sick. Thank you!^-^
Suomanona . Onzwald
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
Thank you all
i felt like this story should have more than the warner's P.O.V in it
Next part i will have 'scratchy's p.o.v too
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-06-07 . chapter 4
Very good chapter. Nice job with HN's part.

Keep the good writing.
Xviera Siramad
2009-05-29 . chapter 3
This story is awesome! I hope you update soon. Please, please, please, update SOON! Good job and keep up the good work! :D
hio590
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
Umm...well to put it nicely your story could use a *little* bit of work. I didn't read the whole story (for various reasons) but what I did read was...somewhat lacking in editing? The beginning was somewhat embarrassing, not a terrible idea for a story but your execution could use a little work. Most of the story just read kinda weird, and what was the point of the flashback? It didn't have much relevance toward the end of the story (if this is only a one chapter thing) and seems like it was just thrown in too make the story longer. I'm curious to see what you do with the second chapter but other then forgetting to use the spell check this story wasn't bad.
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-05-14 . chapter 2
Don't worry. Take your time.

Keep the good writing.
Lukos0036
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
Aside from a minor typo the only thing i can think to add is that lactose intolerance doesn't make you throw up. It makes you poo like mad. Like, crazy high velocity poos. Still pretty good though. Keep writing!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
Nice start.

Keep the good writing.
Return to Top