   kamasimon
2009-06-16 . chapter 3Great chapter, update soon. |
 Doomforyou
2009-06-14 . chapter 1 Not bad, but you really need to have someone beta this, there are way too many grammatical errors and such. |
Darth Lelouch
2009-06-11 . chapter 2Thank fo the chapter. |
kamasimon
2009-05-29 . chapter 2Great chapter, update soon. By the way, I liked how Sasuke didn't use his sword the first time he fought the swordsmen. |
Alexander
2009-05-28 . chapter 2 Great story Graven! Never expected less from you! [;)]
Please update soon! |
kamasimon
2009-05-12 . chapter 1This is way differnet than your others, but I like it a lot. Update soon. |
Darth Lelouch
2009-05-12 . chapter 1A chapter that a good omen for the future. |
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