nice two chapters!
poor penelo and Larsa. I really want them to end up together here the princess seem very mean.

I love it! Please update quickly! :)

Can't wait to see more!

*squeal!* that's more I like it! I love the flirtiness and the lightheartedness of this chapter. And I love love love your balthier!! and I love how he and larsa hate each other, and gah everything. This Lidia is interesting, and Balthier's motives would be something to watch out for too. more power!

Oh, this was very nice! I can't wait to read more! X3

Yay! Update! Loved it, loved it, loved it. LarsaPenelo FTW. Thanks so much for the great work, really looking forward to the next chapter. Though I kinda feel embarassed for Penelo when she gets sober and realises what she's done.

Can this get any better? Haha, Penelo kissed HIM, but is it at her free will and not under the influence of the alcohol? Man do I hate the princess, and why are they arguing?? Is it because she doesn't want to marry him? =p that'd be great~ Since there is only six days left in this story, I would say that this is going to end pretty soon?

But please do update asap although I do hate to have this story end so quickly.

Yes! So happy to see a new chapter of this out! It's adorable!

I hate the princess already. Hate hate hate. I love how he was shouting back at her XD Go Larsa!

She kissed him! Kya! *fangirl squeal* Wonderful! I can't wait to see hi reaction to it next chapter.

And OMFG WEDDING?! Congratulations! <3 <3 <3 I'm so happy for you! You totally deserve it! I bet you looked super gorgeous too XD

Now don't go start making babies just yet! You've still got lots to do! (though I wonder what you would name any children you have)

Can't wait for another chapter! Good job!

Haha Oh wow, what a way to show something, I wonder if she is even going to remember kissing him? Penelo it seemed to me never really thought of the future of how things could change when he got older that she wasn't always going to be able to put of her visits, to ignore how she clearly feels but never thought to **. I wonder what Larsa is to do, as marrying that harpy seems to be a idea from the land of hell that may be bad for his future health. My heart is screaming End it!

But then that would be to simple I imagine... but I'd love them to be able to spend some time together and for Penelo to tell her side of the story she should apoligize for never coming, I do know why she'd hate going to that country... but Larsa is Larsa.

She has a lot to admit and I think these two have quite a catch up. I also bet the harpy noticed the way his face had brightened when he saw her.

This is wonderful and congratulations on your wedding!

I love it! Thanks so much for updating! It was a wonderful surprise to see the alert in my inbox :) Your writing style is awesome and you make it really easy to connect with the characters- your grasp on them is really evident- they are very believable.
Can't wait to see what happens next :)

Looking over this (again), I can't seem to stop laughing. It's wonderful, even if it is a bit sad that this whole mess is even happening. (wibble) Larsa is about as subtle as a bag of bricks, Penelo is drunk and the guards are afraid (?!) of Lidia, but there's serious things underlying it! Really!

... (dies loling)

Gods, I love this chapter. ♥ So so so so much.

Congrats on your wedding! :)
This chapter was just as lovely as the first. I'm so glad that Penelo is still the sweet girl she was in the game, even though she's a(n obvious) full-fledged sky pirate. :) Well, when she's not drunk or angry she seems sweet. xD I'm looking forward to seeing how she'll react when she wakes up.
You know, this fic -- even though it's only two chapters in, even though I didn't care about Larsa before -- has made me really like this couple. Totally my FFXII OTP, haha. Thanks for that.

I wish more people wrote awesome Penelo/Larsa fanfiction like you do.

Wow! I absolutely love it! I know its been a few months but please continue it, I really want to know what happens next :)

If you dont have plans to continue would you consider giving it up for adoption? - or atleast the plot bunny?

Thanks for writing :)

update soon! this is quite good too!