I just want to say that I like it. The chapters are short and somewhat lacking, but I have a feeling this story is going to be amazing once you get the hang of it. Personally, I like to be shown things rather than told. For instance, when you say "there was a big explosion..." No! Show us. Describe what happened. For example: Their opposing reiatus, though both white and surging well beyond either of their forms, clashed and caused an explosion that led to...blah blah blah. Crushed earth and thin air? Show us more. Tell us less. Thanks for writing this though. I love this pairing. :)