love it!...

Can't wait for the next chapter! XD Haha Natsume's a real potty mouth it's almost disturbing. XD

OMG! I so love this chapter. Dont you ever give up on this fantastic piece of work. Im so proud of you! *dresses up in a mom dress and glomps Keiko*

finally..i'd got a chance to read this chapter...and i'm glad you updated already..this chappie is a good one..i can't wait for the next..

PS: how many chappies is this story going to take before it ends?

oolalala things are spicing up :D

UPDATE SOON!

You-chii

mikan is this new story is a hyper edition of being carefree..haha..

somthing to read about, imight add.

as the title suggested it is something out of this world.

i just wanted to ask..what role will natsume play in this story, 'cause his personality is the bad-** type drop dead gorgeous guy, but what of his past? is there something to look forward to?

i don't know but i got this feeling, that something's off..hm..or i'm just being myself..haha

do update soon!

WRITE ON!

when will you update?

DUN DUN DUN! Haha still AHMAZING as usual ;)
Hotaru has finally appeared in the story!(if only for 10 seconds XD)
And I love what they talk about! And it made me hungry...(stupid sandwich talk! Teehee)
I love and hate the cliffie...I WISH THERE WAS MORE TO READ RIGHT NOW! BWAHH! BUT it keeps me reading!(even though I would read it if it didn't have a cliffie)
I also was confused at this: "The score was 3-3. It took four points to win." Did you mean 1? Because they won after making one goal...so I kinda just figure you meant one :)
Anway I just love love love the story. Keep up the great work! Luv ya!

whoa! that was fast keiko-chan!
way too fast... that's a compliment gurl!
GOO!!

cool chappie.. mikan is so funny.. she really told natsume something he didn't know... xD

i find natsume really cool here.. he's not the typicall fire boy anymore but a highschool boy -with issues- and i find it really awesome.. love reading school life fanfics- with a twist. :D

wooh.. meteorite.. kewl!
update.update keiko-chan!

btwayie, tnx for the PM! luv u..

mou keiko-chan, summer is over already.. the HEAVY rain proves it.. which i hate coz it's a hassle commuting when the weather is bad... that's why i don't want to go to school yett.. :( but you have a point.. there's nothin else to do and i missed my classmates too.. ;D

anywayie keiko-chan.. is there a way to communicate with you easily, like fs or YM? i really love to be friends with you! :D

update soon keiko and keep it up!

moree lovee,
::kd::

U, what do we have here? A gigantic meteorite? Cool, so, when will happen something cool again? Like, those 'silver' eyes. Auch, I'm still feeling sorry for poor Natsume-kun. At last Mikan is there, for him, not Ruka. Hehe, sorry, I'm not such a MxR fan. >.< Oh well, can't waito for next chapter!

Update soon!

~Little Cute Girl

hahaha.. now this is interesting ^^ hahaha.. i can't believe he ALMOST missed his game ^^ hahaha.. anyways.. i also can't believe that Mikan was able to eat ramen with six chopsticks! hahah. it's hard imagining it ^^ oh.. so a meteorite was seen, again..? hmm.. i'm guessing Hotaru is the one who will show up next .. am i right..? anyways.. i really had fun! hahah.. ooh.. and i forgot! hahah.. she almost revealed that she wasn't from Tokyo.. hahaha.. i know the next chap would be really.. FUN! good luck^^

DEAR, DEAR, DEAR MEOW-CHAN~
I love you. :)
Anyways. This fic reminded me of the occasional sci-fi teen bopper novels in PowerBooks. (Which I commonly read at.)
This pretty much got me going all excited at the upcoming chapter. You're a pretty great author.
Do I have to remind you at least a couple more times for you to remember that? :))

The Natsume you portray had been pretty much OOC for me. But OOC is good. It brings him a little more to the great imperfect world. And it wouldn't be fun to have the cold, obnoxious Natsume in EVERY story, right? He's much cooler in your story too. XD

About Mikan - I think being 'out of this world' is pretty cool. And I have green neon sneakers! She's adorable. And funny. And cute. And flat chested. ;O Hahaha.

Ruka and Koko are funny. I don't know, they're minor characters. But I love them both. They're the comic relief in every stories.

As for Sumire and her cheap, mean 'friends'. They seem so bitchy in every story. I pity them. XD And as usual. Sumire seemed to be advancing in seducing Natsume. (Sha had kissed him on the edge of his lips! I'm suddenly envious. XD)

Your characters may have slipped in some way or another, but you managed to bring them back up. :) In short, your characters are very well portrayed in your novel. The mix is perfect. Not too OOC and very normal.

I wuv you. :D

Meow-chan.
I know I'm not supposed be anticipating the dedicated thing you said before. But after reading OFTW. It made me a little more excited.
Hahahaha.

Don't stop writing okay? And Woofie-chan will always be here to support you. :)
I lalalove yoush.
Mwah. :*

-Woofie.

DEAR, DEAR, DEAR MEOW-CHAN~
I love you. :)
Anyways. This fic reminded me of the occasional sci-fi teen bopper novels in PowerBooks. (Which I commonly read at.)
This pretty much got me going all excited at the upcoming chapter. You're a pretty great author.
Do I have to remind you at least a couple more times for you to remember that? :))

The Natsume you portray had been pretty much OOC for me. But OOC is good. It brings him a little more to the great imperfect world. And it wouldn't be fun to have the cold, obnoxious Natsume in EVERY story, right? He's much cooler in your story too. XD

About Mikan - I think being 'out of this world' is pretty cool. And I have green neon sneakers! >..<
Hahahaha.

Don't stop writing okay? And Woofie-chan will always be here to support you. :)
I lalalove yoush.
Mwah. :*

-Woofie. <3

awesome chappie :D i wanna read what happens next :D

Natsume and Mikan relationship development chapter~ Sweet. Go Natsume! I could imagine him shooting the ball inside the goal and it was wicked! I freaking love the part when Natsume used his old bike to get to the game and how he just trashed it when he was there already, reminds me of what I did when I needed to go to my brother's game and I was late too. Haha.

Updates are love :D

~Aki Eschirott