I really liked this story, it really sounds like Todd. And I liked how you portrayed the other Brotherhood members, thats just how I think they interact. Like a big family, but without the touchy-feeling stuff. But dont write a second part, because that would ruin the effect this story has.

so sad... my eyes are all misty... what happened? what happened? don't take it down!

Oh. That was so sad. Very touching.

*exceptionally sweet smile* To Someone:

I don't write for Pokemon. I never did, except as a humor fic in which I unleashed Misty on Koushiro dear. Other than that, I have stuck to Digimon, CCS, and X-Men: Evolution. If you had checked my profile, you would have seen this. Pikachumaniac is merely a penname and identity I have retained for almost two years now.

Thank you.

stick to pokemon, cuase i just don't buy this.

hey man its good dont delete it

hey, that was good! u should write a second part which DOES tell what happened to them. im one of those ppl who always have to know those little details. anyway, good todd pov!

I like!