In my opinion, this is an extremely well-done fanfic. I love it.

Very enjoyable, very well written composition! :D Lezard gets a degree of attention, although Mystina is surprisingly neglected. THough I don't really like Lezard, I felt their interactions in VP:L were quite entertianing, s the setting of your fan fiction caught my eye. ^-^ I'm glad you decided to post this! You should write mroe Valkyrie Profile fan fiction; you're quite talented.

Furthermore, you had everyone in character! Good work! The flow of the story and descriptions within it were all very professional.

As a random addition, did you know in the English version of VP:L Lorenta has the same voice actress as Lenneth? XD

Great work!



The Final Hikari

Always a pleasure to see Lezard getting teased- there aren't enough Lezard/Mysty fics out there, in my opinion. Very nice :)