I know it's old but I'm starting to just read some of your old stuff. All I can say is "wow". I can see it happening to him, but doesn't mean I want it to. Someone suggest Gibbs POV about what Tony is going thru, bet you'd do a heck of a job of that. Your good.

This is one of those things you read, and then you say "Damn." And then you just sort of stare at the computer screen for a little bit.

So that's what I did.

Very, very well written!

*a box of tissues later*

...I'll pretend Gibbs somehow showed up and saved the day.

Like in Snow Day.

*opens another box of tissues*

*frozen*
wow, that was different. And good.

Countdown at alpha...Prose in motion...with Tony sliding.Uo-oh moment when Abby leaves,then McGee (the house is crumbling),and Gibbs soon...and omega. That's it.I'm seriously depressed.

Wow, I don't really know what else to say. This was so sad, but so possible. Tony really does have a dark side that isn't explored too much on the show. He's way too hard on himself and way too easy on those around him.

Great job!

WOW! That was SO Sad and SO amazing! :) Poor Tony-Please write more!

It is a sad story and, sadly, somewhat viable knowing Tony's penchant for blaming himself and internalizing his pain to an extreme.


Good story.
I felt his misery.

I shouldnt have read this. My hear already broke in two when Tony was begging Rivkin to stop so that he wouldnt have to kill him... but now after reading this? I feel as if I am going to be sick. And I *dont* do emotions.
NCIS hasnt been healthy for me today... or last week.. or the week before. And you've just added to that :(
Nice work. Nicely written. Well done.

wow so powerful I just hope that this does not break the team wow

you were right - i did need tissues, that was so sad and depressing! i haven't scene the episode yet(i live in Australia) and just reading about it and see a preview for the final sent me panicky! and i mean realy panicky!


you should write more!


Love NCISchick xoxoxoxo

What on earth happened to Tony? Can you make this a two piece please? Just to see Gibbs' reaction to all of it. I'd love it if you did. Thanks for sharing such a great, though angsty, piece! Ugh...now back to cramming for finals.

Very good. Very sad, but certainly very good.