so so lovely, and the part about the tribbles...gold.

Beautiful.
Absolutely beautiful.

:)

Defiantly a bitter sweet story. On the one hand Ambassador Spock is such a tragic character in so many ways. On the other hand though how could you not smile at a story the great piece of final wisdom that the Ambassador sends his younger self off into the universe with is "Beware of Tribbles". I really enjoyed this one thank you.

AW! I might actually cry. I'm gonna miss Spock Prime if he ends up dying in the next movie. Younger Spock had better take care of Kirk! (and vice versa).

Excellent fic, I loved it!

heehe, some parts of that was pretty funny, and others were really say. i loved it, though. good job! *adds to favs*

Lovely...just lovely...

Nicely done. Wonderful job at capturing the characters' voices. I especially loved the 'flashbacks.' And while I'm not a K/S shipper, the way you wrote this is very believable.

Thank you for sharing this.

"TO TREKKIE'S WHO MAY WANT TO KILL ME FOR ANY INCONSISTENCIES: Please be nice. Point out my faults and I'll correct them. It has been a very long time since I was last a fan of Star Trek: Enterprice (I was 4)"

So by my calculations, that would make you 12. And somebody took you in to see WATCHMEN?! Where are your parents? Hot damn.

PS: you can't be a "long-lived" fan when you haven't even made it through puberty yet... remember, your life expectancy jumps once you make it past age 20. Words to live by...

This was beautiful. Amazing. I loved it.

That was very sweet. And sad.

-Ellie

Aww you made me cry D: I'm only an emotionally driven human! Why torture me so?!? This was a really great story. Sorry I can't be constructive.

Oh, I really really liked this. It kept Spock and Kirk in character nicely. You should do some more stories with them. ^_^ Please?

Uh. Are you ignoring Kirk's fate in the movie Generations? He didn't die in Spock's arms, far from it; he died helping Captain Picard thwart yet another enemy.

Chekov's first name is PAVEL, not Babel, and he isn't Communications officer; that's Uhura's role. Hikaru Sulu's name is not spelled with a Z. Young Spock may be First Officer (title) and also Commander (rank) but he is definitely not "1st Commander". And I should hope that Spock would have given them a bit more serious advice (for example, about the probe from Movie IV) than just Tribbles!

Though I did like the emotional depth of your story very much, these multiple serious instances of factual fail were a serious turn-off. Please do your research, it only takes a quick Google for heaven's sake, and try again.

This story is love. And brilliance. *faints* More please! You write them (all 3 of them) so well!

loved it. :3