 k13cat 5/22/11 . chapter 1I love the twist in the first task and truly enjoyed a lot of this story. It was nice to have Luna show up and I thought that the way hermione was acting after the first task until luna talked to her was actually in character. When harry leaves things did get a bit out there with sending snape out a window as opposed to just knocking him out; but then there's animosity there anyway. At the end, though, I did have to wonder what happened to Hedwig (a little thing, but important to canon harry), and with Sirius. |
 H Harmon 3/11/11 . chapter 1I, again, find it difficult to a new or different way to express the enjoyment that I receive from reading your fics. I don’t normally read one shots but I think that I have read all of your stories that are longer. I have definitely have read more of your one-shots than anyone else’s. Thank You. |
 sarah-rose76646 10/5/10 . chapter 1Hey mate, long time no update? That rhymes.
Anyway, nice chapter. But i was thinking, snape has proven he is a practical and logical man. He used harry's advice 'bout the counter to cruciatus curse. Was nice enough, for him at least, and also knew the faults and sadistic tendencies of his godson. Then why would he try to kill harry for defending himself from draco? His death was an accident and his own fault for charging harry at top of stairs. Why would he kill lily's son, who he always protected, even if he hated him for being james son too, for an idiotic, rapist of a godson? He wants the dark lord dead. He betrayed voldemort because of lily, he didnt agreed with killing, torture and rape etc, of innocents nor participated in it. He only maintained his cover for other death eaters and voldemort, but helped while he could and where he could. Harry knows that, otherwise he wouldn't have told him, if he was really a traitor, about the counter to cruciatus. So, if he a good guy, ethically, Then wouldn't he be revolted by draco? He raped many girls, from his own house, some even 11-12 yr olds. Why avenge him? Snape may be heartless, cruel and harsh, but he's not sympathic to death eaters goals, like rape, torture and killing. If his own godson does that, it is far more likely that he would disown him, not go on revenge ride.
Just my opinion.
S J Rose |
 WhiteElfElder 9/25/10 . chapter 1Oh, why couldn't Harry have done something like drop DumbDumb off in the middle of a flock of nesting Dragon mothers without his wand! Nicely written. So much fun could be had with Harry's animagus form and ability to talk to any magical creature. Just think, he would be the perfect magical preserve director. |
 peruser 8/17/10 . chapter 1The phrase 'go jump in a lake!' struck me as I read this story, and I just laughed each time Harry dunked Dumbles. It was what he deserved. I was disappointed in Minerva though. She knew that Dumbledore was in the wrong, yet she still drew her wand on Harry. I liked the story! Good job! |