This is a quick review I am going to write you a goos few paragraphs on the last one ! It is awsome ! need I say more! x

aw great ending

Really nice it was really fun to read You wrote it perfect!

Yay! I thought you had forgotton about this. Awesome end!

Great story!

aw poor Sara hope she gets better soon

Ah, another great chapter. This is very interesting, intriguing, and engrossing. In other words, cool! Looking forward to the rest of the chapters!

That was good

very good.

Only 1 more chapter left? Bummer. This was such a great story that I hate to see it ending. Loved that scene with Greg coming over and Grissom feeling uncomfortable.

Great chapter! Grissom was about to blow their cover! lol

I really like it! Puh-leaze Continue Soon! (short chapters aren't bad, as long as they're still well written. Which yours are.) :)

GReat chapter

yes still loving the story more very soon please .

I had to catch up on the chapters, and boy, did I enjoy doing so. This series of chapters are just wonderful! Great story!