I like it!

Good chapter. I wonder what they are going to do about this whole situation. I hope they can help Malik.

Oh, Bakura…

And Doctor Who. Lol.

Well, awesome story. You portray the feelings so well and so realistically it's really addictive. Also, I think you should turn the rating to T- with all the death and mental problems there K is a little too soft, I think.

Ryuuji is awesome. The Pharaoh, too. It's nice to see the Pharaoh's dark side again, like in the manga…

Continue soon, it's really good.

GOod chapter. I feel bad for Otogi. I hope they can come to some resolution.

GOod chapter. I hope they can deal with the evil.

this fanfic is like something i'd do, except i'd give Kaiba the puzzle instead of Duke (that's his TV name, and the only name for him i knew before i read this fanfic)

Good chapter. I feel bad for the Pharaoh. I hope he finds peace.

Good chapter. Otogi is seeing some odd things. It might help him in the future when he sees just what his father has caused by killing Yuugi.

Good chapter. The Pharaoh has given up. I hope they can change his mind.

Good chapter. I feel bad for both ot them. Poor Pharaoh. He really misses Yuugi.

I AM IN SO MUCH FREAKIN LOVE WITH STORY! I love it! I want to read more! MORE! _

So what will Bakura think when he realizes that Yami is kinda...not right now?I can't wait to read it! _

Love,

Kuro

Good story. I feel bad that Yuugi died right in the beginning. His father got less than he deserved. It was too easy for him.

I love it. _

Lovely...and i like thats it very different.

This is fascinating, and very well written. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, and how Malik will enter this fic!

I'm very much looking forward to more!