Oh my. Amazing! I love how deep into the character's minds you go. It really explains a lot. Hopefully sometime you could write a story with Leon and Ada with a slightly happier ending. It would be interesting to see how that would play out.

this is interesting

Leon is such a **, we all know it XD At first, I didn't agree with the "regular James Bond" characterization. But then I thought, wait, Leon would totally think of *himself* that way. So it's pretty funny. Great voice in this fic.

I like Ashley, and you've characterized her in a really unique way in how you compare her to Ada. Usually, it's 'she's so different,' but you took it in a completely unexpected way. "In her own naïve little way, little Ashley was more self assured than even Ada Wong herself." lol, love it.