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LemonStar
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
Sorry I am so late reviewing this. I have been so crazy busy with my story that I am just now getting around to reading other things. I absolutely loved where you took the sneak peak we got - though I wish your story had been what had actually happened in the episode.

“I mean, really. Everyone can see how I feel about you, and you are the only one who seems to think that you are not worthy of me. Lexie, I am lucky that you ever even looked my way. Believe me, I didn’t deserve it. And now, you are surprised that I want to live with you? Lexie, I am totally, madly in love with you. Of course I want to live with you.”

This part was such perfection because I really do think that beneath everything, there is a vulnerability to both Mark and Lexie about the other. Mark and his reputation and Lexie worrying that she will not be enough for him. I LOVED the way you wrote this out between them. Thank you for writing this.
Estelle Stafford
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
That would have been so nice, but she said no because of her career Argh! I like this version better, really good and cute story.
driver picks the music
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
Omg, this was so good, Lexie really was completely oblivious. And that clip was great, I love the look on his face when she walked away. lol! Good job.
MerDer4ver
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
I like it. you should think about writing more.
Slexie4eva
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
Aw, so sweet!
lostie21
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Oh I hope this happens on the show! I just love these two. Thanks for the fic! :D
Emowyen
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Loved it!! I so hope this is what happens!! I think it would be a great move for the two of them to take!
belairdesi
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
that was amazing! can't wait for more.
magickell
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
I love it! If only this will really happen! I'm sure Shonda will torture us with miscommunication between Lexie and Mark throughout most of the season finale and then (hopefully!) a grand clarification moment and MAYBE even an ILY? I'll be content with Lexie agreeing to move in with him, though. Just one more day!
primadonna001
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
lovely! lets hope this happens
scoob2222
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
this was so sweet and adorable.
cjwc
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
hehehe...I love Mark and Lexie and that was a fantastic. :-)
Gaialy
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
I just can't wait for the episode, and it would be great if it ended like that!
Shanynde
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Hopfully this is how it will play out! Any chance you could do this chapter in Mark's POV?
Aragorns Arwen
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Loved everything about this story!

Until i read.. ** my girlfriend. Came out of the left field there.. all this sunshine and roses and then boom! ** my girlfriend. Lol.

Great story
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