 Bansheehowl 2009-11-08 . chapter 21Hi!
There is one thing that irks me about this...maybe you can explain it to me?
It was my impression that when House was taken away from everybody (insert sad music here) he was not aware that Danny was dead. But, when he got home, he showered literally no grief for Danny, and there was no acknowledgment of his death. Wilson/Foreman/Chase didn't even explain his death to a supposed to be oblivious House, and he did not questions Danny being missing. Unless I'm mistaken and I haven't read carefully.
I'm a bit OCD, so yeah XD
I love this series and story! It's so unique and creative, and I've read it over several times :) |
 Gertrude2034 2009-09-06 . chapter 21So glad you updated -- I wondered if this story was going to be abandoned!
This was a completely bizarre story from beginning to end, but somehow you kept me captivated and made it easy to shove the rational questions about what and how to the back of my mind. I loved Eli's insight "Maybe nature is making something new" and I think that really is the answer to what's "wrong" with Wilson.
I'm in awe of the way you have imagined this whole world, right from the virus through to Laurent's "factories", to the Zion-like world of their little farm. I hope someday we might come back and visit them again, find out how House is doing in his new little laboratory and whether or not they stop at an even dozen babies.
Great job. |
 doraka90 2009-09-03 . chapter 19wow, the last four chapters were great, and i really like your work. Please keep updating and writing. |
 Lorien Lupin 2009-08-28 . chapter 19Hi, and by the way, Wow! You are the only one who could make read a mpreg and not only not want to rip my eyes out but love it. Is amazing, you are definitely a miracle worker and one hell of a writer. I read it all in 2 sitings, great story, can't wait for the next chapter. I don't like Eli, but I can suffer him because the story is terrific. Kisses from Peru, and please keep writing house fics. |
 MadScientistGirl 2009-08-18 . chapter 19I love the wacky, strange world that you have created. The strange diagnosis of Wilson feels plausible, because you have taken so much time to establish the new world. I am really curious as to how this is going to progress. |
 Gertrude2034 2009-08-15 . chapter 19Still not sure I understand why getting House pregnant will cure Wilson. But then this is a totally different universe with totally different rules, so I guess it will make sense somehow. |
 Gertrude2034 2009-07-30 . chapter 18Ah, so NOW it makes sense! Except that Wilson still isn't right! I wonder if House will go through with his last-ditch cure and, if he does, whether it will work? |
 lhoma320 2009-07-24 . chapter 17This chapter was wonderful! So much Wilson Angst! I loved it. You made my stomach flip so many times with them holding Wilson down, then force feeding him, and then making him stay on his side. Between that, the fever and baths, I didn't think I'd make it. :)
I think you are doing a great job with this story. I can't wait to find out what is wrong with Wilson. My only concern is there might be a major character death in the near future.
I hope not! Thanks for the update. |
 Gertrude2034 2009-07-24 . chapter 17Thanks for updating - I've been seeing your other stories updated and wondering when we were going to get back to finding out how Wilson was doing! House's theory sounded fine to me, but then they went and disproved it. Maybe it only happens to 'soul mates' or something? I hope they find a cure. Update soon! |
 cathepsut 2009-07-24 . chapter 17Thanks for the update! I guess Wilson is too sick now for House to just do the dirty with him, ey? Hm... |
 TombeDeLaLune 2009-07-24 . chapter 17oh no!
please update soon!
I am waiting for Wilson's kid who'll look like House! |
 Gertrude2034 2009-07-12 . chapter 16You did have something sneaky up your sleeve after all! But I'm still not sure what it is! Is Wilson sick? Or is something more sinister at play? Can he ever get back to normal, loving Wilson, without this bizarre desperation? |
 Gertrude2034 2009-07-07 . chapter 15Now THAT I wasn't expecting. Does Wilson really have that in him? I guess it must be those extra-potent hormones that you've created in this 'verse. I don't want to believe it would be just Wilson. What are they going to do now? Will he be banished or something? Can't wait for the next part. |
 TombeDeLaLune 2009-06-29 . chapter 14ooh! poor Wilson!
Everyone else is having two kids but him!!
and out of curosity, does House ever top ;) ?? |
 Lilith2007 2009-06-28 . chapter 14Hahahahaha! I can just see Chase sitting there all smug! Hahahaha! That was a good chapter! Can't wait to see who the father is! |