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Bare Eyes 9/9/10 . chapter 9
I'm not a big GaaSaku fan. I prefer SasuSaku over that. Like, totally. So when I read Anesthesia, the ending sort of made me go MADFACE 'cause I wanted Sakura and Sasuke to have hot sex.

But then I read this, and I'm like, "YEAH!" 'cause even though the end was like, sad and stuff, Gaara and Sakura end up together again anyway.

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So about the quality of the story. 50% of the people on FF who write Naruto fan fictions cannot write for the life of them. 40% have great storylines, but they make really icky typos so it's annoying to read the story. 10% have really nice plots and make the occasional typo. I'd say you're part of the 10%. There were obvious spelling mistakes in places, but who doesn't typo? I also felt as if the story was a little...thin. I mean, the obvious plot was about Sakura fully recovering from this disaster that struck her, but the way it seemed as I read the story was, like, LOL RELATIONSHIPS RELATIONSHIPS RELATIONSHIPS obtw Sakura.

That's just my opinion, though, and I'm not critic. D:

I'ma go read more of your stories now. And then pick through your favorites.

kbai
leogirl321 7/23/09 . chapter 9
I kinda didnt like the ending but i do wonder what happened between her and itachi hope you do a sequel thanks for completing it it was great keep it up!
JamieKins1126 7/23/09 . chapter 9
I loved it!
leogirl321 7/22/09 . chapter 5
i liked it- scratch that I LOVED it it was really good glad that sakura got over gher 'fear' of Gaara but i wish the Haruto snip haadnt been added even though it was key to the story it made me cry TTTT - me but i loved it
Sasuke's girl 1 6/29/09 . chapter 1
What up girl it's me gigi!_ I have a phone you should call me! My # is 1424- 298- 1422 So I hope you call me I miss you guys so much (
blindsnake 6/24/09 . chapter 1
Evening though i hate sakura i love this story hope u know who i am p.s. i love itachi
sasukes girl 1 6/15/09 . chapter 1
GOOD JOB ON THE STORY GAARA 4LIFE I JUST L.O.V.E THIS COUPLE! THEY ROCK! BUT SASUKE AND SAI ARE MY ALL -
kallou 5/14/09 . chapter 1
wtf? good job!
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