 Bare Eyes 9/9/10 . chapter 9I'm not a big GaaSaku fan. I prefer SasuSaku over that. Like, totally. So when I read Anesthesia, the ending sort of made me go MADFACE 'cause I wanted Sakura and Sasuke to have hot sex.
But then I read this, and I'm like, "YEAH!" 'cause even though the end was like, sad and stuff, Gaara and Sakura end up together again anyway.
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So about the quality of the story. 50% of the people on FF who write Naruto fan fictions cannot write for the life of them. 40% have great storylines, but they make really icky typos so it's annoying to read the story. 10% have really nice plots and make the occasional typo. I'd say you're part of the 10%. There were obvious spelling mistakes in places, but who doesn't typo? I also felt as if the story was a little...thin. I mean, the obvious plot was about Sakura fully recovering from this disaster that struck her, but the way it seemed as I read the story was, like, LOL RELATIONSHIPS RELATIONSHIPS RELATIONSHIPS obtw Sakura.
That's just my opinion, though, and I'm not critic. D:
I'ma go read more of your stories now. And then pick through your favorites.
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