umm,, in th esecond paragraph, you said sonic had GREEN spiky up wit dat?

I did NOT die, contrary to popular belief. HaHA! But anyway, this story was extremely groovy. It was dripping with grooviness. I'm glad I made time to finally read it, because it was well worth. Don't listen to that Vincent dork, he has no clue what he's babbling about; this story was the cat's MROWWWWWW. Though maybe you should have given it to me to edit first... I found a buncha grammer and punctuation mistakes, heh. But NITPICKING ASIDE, it had a solid plotline, good character development, and good dialogue. I'm STILL laughing from "stop talking about how gay it is"! If I could sum it up in one word: "Schway".

Your Ole Pal, Sonic Dust

It was definetly worth reading all those chapters. I loved the story from beggining to end. I hope you do well in your Exams, I know they can be killers. The idea of having a dark sorceress for a villain is a good one and neatly used. The fact that the Fat Bum escaped leaves an open space for further fics. Please do keep writing after the exams, even if I have to wait until July(My B'day ). And would love to see more of Lazer and Rebecca, also the wed's details.

Not too bad but really (blank...blank...) LONG! But i loved it , very exciting. the speech part was too long. HOW LONG IT TOOK U TO TYPE DIS? You gotta lot of patience and talent...but you must try to expand beyond the Sonic, Megaman stuff dude!

Bravo! This is an absolutely excellent story. I look forward to reading more of your work, even if it won't be for another half a year.

ACK! you didn't say what happened to hannah! dammit. are you making me wait till july? anyway, great story. me thinks your best yet. yup yup.

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice! Awesome work as usual, my fellow SIFF!

O_O whoo! i AM an evil kitty! yousa wasn't joking...n e way, me has to do lossa stuff, so i con back and finish later, k? (for other people reading this review, i am the person he used to create hannah, and no, i do not go around torturing people's souls for fun. thank you and have a nice day! _)