Wow! I just have to come round to Dynasty's opinion (to chapter 1).
I really hope you two keep writing this story!

You know...

I always figured there was somethingdeeper involved with Caius's bitterness. Someone should remind him that envy is an emotion quite laughable, and is most surely an"abberration", to quote him, among Vampiricsociety. For someone to have existed on this planet, for thousands of yearsmind you,to float around lamenting and pouting like an angry infant whose baba has been taken,suggests the complete antithesis of the idea that he rightfully belongs atop his self constructed gilded pedestal as a paragon of authority, ruling over his kind with a righteously slammed iron hand. I won't presume to dictate the direction in which you should take this story, but I hope Caius is among the fallen, should any of the Cullens, or any of the witnesses, meet an end.

Nice! Very very nice. I hope you two get around to completing this story soon. I'd have loved for Stephenie to have at least given us a little clue as to what went on post Volturi punk out. This is great. Thanks for hitting us with the action right in the beginning.

This is an extremely well written piece of work and I especially thank you for keeping up the language. So many of the authors fail to capture the true escence of the story by mangling the writing style so badly that you barely can stand to keep reading. I will be checking out ALL of your work. Please keep it up! You do Mrs. Meyer a great deal of justice. Many props and thanks to your partner in crime. You seem to be working well together to bring us readers something we can really get into from cover to virtual cover. I am visually impaired and have to use a screen reader on the internet. This is a nice little treat for me at the end of the day. Though you are not Stephenie Meyer, I am drawn to your stories because I believe that you and she think along the same lines as far as the story telling goes. You offer REAL insight into the mental processes of the characters, paying very close attention to the plots of the novels and allowing them to work in tandom with your own creativity so that the story fits well into the minds of the more passionate readers of the series. Again, I encourage you to keep this going. I hope you NEVER have to encounter the vicious betrayal that befell Stephenie Meyer. I was more angry about the violation of her rights as an author than I was with the Midnight Sun project being placed on hold. I loved your take on the story. I apologise about the spelling errors that I am sure are all over this review. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

xoxoxox D

I'd have to say, you took my breath away on this chapter. It was like... I don't know what it was like. I never read anything from Aro's POV before and it was very interesting and intriguing to know some of his past. It almost makes him likeable! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE - I beg of you both - continue with this story. I'm already getting goose bumps at the prospect.

Ah-hah! Things are finally getting interesting. What could it all mean? I wonder...

I know this is on hiatus, but I hope you both continue writing this fabulous story. After reading your New Moon EPOV, I realize how amazing your imagination is and I know you will do this story justice!

this is such an incredable story!

Love ALL your writing ,I think this story is very entertaining-but then again every story so far has been wonderful-can't wait for the next chapter.PLEASE keep writing ,and thank you so much for these stories.

wow!so far so good! i can't wait to read more!

Wow... Aro's POV! Great idea! I love the parallel between Aro and Edward's lives! I can't wait to see where this story goes!!

lol... ok, so Lola corrected me on our own story. YES, apparently Tiziana would, in fact, have known Didyme. The pitfalls of co-authoring and the right hand not paying attention to what the left hand was doing. My apologies. ;) Obviously I was in my own little world on this one.

that was really good, it gave me a whole new insight to Aro's character. i nearly cried throughout this chapter. i never actually gave very much thought to how he felt on the inside. i'd always thought of him as a cruel person, never giving much thought to what pain he may have been going through.
very good, and keep going!

Thank you for the reviews! Just a heads up ... Lola and I went wild speculating on this chapter. We discussed Marcus and Didyme, and actually Aro meets Tiziana after the death of Didyme, but one whould assume she knew about Aro's sister. Alas, this is not Aro's story. I suspect in another story Aro will be more thoroughly explored, as might Marcus. But, as Lola will tell you, it took everything she had to kick me in the tush to get this chapter co-authored and out to you. :)

I was thinking it was Marcus at first because of all the thoughts about his wife, but then I was like wait, that wasn't her name. lol I like the pause where Aro sees Alec, I'm glad you quickly cleared up why Alice didn't see Aro's involvement with Caius' plan. Although I wonder where Marcus is?

Amazing chapter. Aro has always intriged me because there were hints in the books - his insatiable curiosity and his ability to like Carlisle, for example - to suggest that he's more than a power hungry maniac. I'd, however, expected to understand how Tiziana had felt about Aro's murder of his sister, since she and Dydem knew each other, why didn't Marcus try to kill Aro afterwards and how they met Caius, since he's already mentioned as with them after Tiziana's death. Anyway, I love the sychological and emotional conlexity.