XD Yeah, Gin might be right. There isn't many more stupid things that he can do. I love how you keep sneaking other people in here. Mashiro. If you've mentioned some of them before, maybe I'm just not perceptive, but it's still neat. And you're still updating and doing NaNoWriMo at a huge rate too. Sheesh. Totally task oriented. I was ahead of schedule yesterday, but now im slightly behind. I wish I had your drive. -WV

How fun. I laughed throughout this whole thing. I love both of their personalities. The hypnosis part was my favorite. So wonderful. -WV

What a nice (mostly) light-hearted chapter! It was good to get some extended time with Kisuke, and I love they way you've handled Kaien. I hope he gets back safe and sound from Amman soon!

I do hope that Matsumoto does not hurt him too much...maybe she knows already but is waiting for him to confess...hope this incident does not cause too much conflict in their relationship.

XD XD Gin is certainly up the proverbial creek. I agree that Shunsui would be excellent at giving advice to others. Gin's way of approaching him was hilarious. He's just stretching his legs. Of course. XD XD It is great. -WV

I'm glad to see another familiar face. I like how you encorporate all of the original characters in real-life roles which suit them.

I really like this chapter :) A little lighter, and of course, it's always nice to read about Jyuushiro.

But at least he finished one XD Sometimes that's all we can ask for in a day. So the crew wasn't complete yet even. Woo. It's fun to see the other characters pop up. I don't remember, has Retsu been in this yet? Gah my memory is so bad. -WV

I agree with Matsumoto. If the country knew what happened in the president's office...I still can't get over that you made Urahara president...i mean, he is perfect for the job...but he has such a scheming nature, that i think the responsibility of running the country would get in the way of his schemes.

There, now it's working. I don't know why it's doing that to your updates. This chapter made me laugh though. We just went over fallacies again in Comp a few weeks ago. It seemed fitting. The cookie thing was also funny. I guess Toshiro isn't lucky today. Hilarious. At least to me. -WV

Oh how I would love to work in the same office as Shunsui. That would be so much fun. I laughed at the bagel thing. The way he said it was hilarious. It's nice to see some ShuNao interaction after that long tense time too. -WV

Oh dear. asking Shunsui advice. o.o
Poor Gin. That was so awesome! keep it up!

Ohh poor poor Gin, keeping mum about it won't help, no it won't! Poor poor Gin.

XD He'll ask Shunsui. Yes. They do get into trouble. I love the new summary too. Very true. I can imagine Rangiku's...being upset, for lack of a better word. I think it might be entertaining. Gin has a stalker. I find that hilarious. Usually he's the one creeping around and such. Maybe it's just me. Great chapter. I look forward to seeing Rangiku's reaction. :) -WV

Yay. So it looks like he's going to get to keep his job after all. That's a good thing. I think it was an impressive tomato too. Oh well. Kisuke never fails to amuse me. Pretty amazing. -WV