All things considered, I think Kisuke has a very good reason to be in a bad mood. I'd say he was taking it on a personal level, but who can blame him. I think they should be allowed to do that too, seeing how they are human. It is getting intense. I can't wait to see what happens next.

On a side note, I'm congratulating you on your word count again. It just blows my mind how far you got in so little time. It's very impressive. You're just a hop, skip, and a jump away now. How supportive is your family of your writing? I'm just curious. Maybe I'm just trying to figure out how the great people do it :) -WV

Poor Urahara. Now he will feel guilty, because he is president and ultimately he is responsible for the fate of the members of the army.

Oh! Oh no, this really, really was tragic. I was afraid that Kaien would get killed, but now that he has ... poor Urahara, having to tell Kaien's wife. The writing, though, is still very good. And the story just sucks you in.

hoopsie.. some one!s going to get spanked.
I!m sorry for kaiens seath but I love Uraharas reaction.

Because even Kisuke can be serious when he needs to be. It doesn't sound good, in that scary depressing sort of way :( But I like that there's a lot of plot to these arcs. Ikkaku XD That's kinda random. And Hachigen and Kensei. I wouldn't think to add some of them. I'm glad to see it. But holy cow, when did this get so many chapters? They seem to just fly by. And I'm enjoying every minute of it. -WV

XD Yeah, Gin might be right. There isn't many more stupid things that he can do. I love how you keep sneaking other people in here. Mashiro. If you've mentioned some of them before, maybe I'm just not perceptive, but it's still neat. And you're still updating and doing NaNoWriMo at a huge rate too. Sheesh. Totally task oriented. I was ahead of schedule yesterday, but now im slightly behind. I wish I had your drive. -WV

How fun. I laughed throughout this whole thing. I love both of their personalities. The hypnosis part was my favorite. So wonderful. -WV

What a nice (mostly) light-hearted chapter! It was good to get some extended time with Kisuke, and I love they way you've handled Kaien. I hope he gets back safe and sound from Amman soon!

I do hope that Matsumoto does not hurt him too much...maybe she knows already but is waiting for him to confess...hope this incident does not cause too much conflict in their relationship.

XD XD Gin is certainly up the proverbial creek. I agree that Shunsui would be excellent at giving advice to others. Gin's way of approaching him was hilarious. He's just stretching his legs. Of course. XD XD It is great. -WV

I'm glad to see another familiar face. I like how you encorporate all of the original characters in real-life roles which suit them.

I really like this chapter :) A little lighter, and of course, it's always nice to read about Jyuushiro.

But at least he finished one XD Sometimes that's all we can ask for in a day. So the crew wasn't complete yet even. Woo. It's fun to see the other characters pop up. I don't remember, has Retsu been in this yet? Gah my memory is so bad. -WV

I agree with Matsumoto. If the country knew what happened in the president's office...I still can't get over that you made Urahara president...i mean, he is perfect for the job...but he has such a scheming nature, that i think the responsibility of running the country would get in the way of his schemes.

There, now it's working. I don't know why it's doing that to your updates. This chapter made me laugh though. We just went over fallacies again in Comp a few weeks ago. It seemed fitting. The cookie thing was also funny. I guess Toshiro isn't lucky today. Hilarious. At least to me. -WV