 kikismith34 2009-05-26 . chapter 1GOOD BUT WAY TO SMALL |
 probysgirl 2009-05-16 . chapter 1This is really cute. Tho i did miss read the bit about mac wearing dress blues and thought it said he was gonna wear a blue dress! lol. |
 afrozenheart412 2009-05-15 . chapter 1This is sweet yet oh so funny. My favorite part has to be the reason why Lindsay slaps him. But this is my favorite line "Lucy hadn’t done anything noteworthy yet, and he was still completely in love with her." Very sweet. |
 ioanhoratio 2009-05-14 . chapter 1This is sweet and fluffy. It is the sprinkles on the ice cream! Thanks! |
 JESSMARY25 2009-05-14 . chapter 1Aww, baby Lucy is the cutest baby! You really capture what he thought he was meant to have or want only to know that he will love his child no matter what. He is going to be a good father and fun for us to watch. |