Very, very interesting! Aha keep it comin'!

O_o . . . PIKACHU! Oh man lol. Ahaha that was a funny chapter. Can't wait for more!

Interesting yet again lol. It's okay, I stopped updating for a good three months before so don't worry lol. :)

Wow, another very, very random chapter lol. ^^

Yeah lol it was crazy yet again. :P

Wow. . . definitely random. :S

Oh my gosh lol. for some strange reason, I just can't stop reading this random stuff aha. It's weird, but funny.

Yep, definitely random... lol

Wow... this is very, very random...

Well, I am interested in reading more.. :)

This was just as interesting as the first chapter lol. Thanks for quality entertainment. :)

Hm, this does seem like a pretty out there idea :S lol but um, just make sure to put forth a little bit more detail and try to make your dialogue flow smoother. That's all I have to say.

On the other hand it was good and I can't wait for more! :D