 jlc7 2009-12-25 . chapter 15 LOVED it! GREAT job! GREAT story! |
 cathy smith 2009-11-22 . chapter 15 Thank you for a great story. I start so many stories only to stop cause they are so poorly written. Yours was a treat to read, and the plot was great. You nailed the characters without gushing or making them stupid. Again, keep up the great writing and thanks for sharing it. |
 Azamiko 2009-11-19 . chapter 15Lots of action-y fun and well-plotted and written. |
 302pilot 2009-10-29 . chapter 15Awesome story! I really enjoyed seeing Jackson Gibbs again, and your characterizations were spot-on. So detailed, so involved. Great story arc, with all characters involved, even Palmer! Really enjoyed the team dynamic, and Jackson fit so perfectly into the 'family'. Thank you so much--
CB |
 angry penguin 2009-10-18 . chapter 15I finally finished! Overall a great story. Honestly. You captured the team dynamic, Gibbs standards from his team, Tony`brilliance,( of course. ;)Heck. Even Gibbs and his Dad` `relationship` issues. And of course, the Bad guys, who I truly loathed, ( as you know. Lol.) getting the justice that they truly deserved. The team visiting Tony and Gibbs, awesome.
I was wondering. Any chance of doing a fic where Tony is still recovering with the company of Jackson Gibbs? I can only imagine.
:) Not only that, but I liked the fact that not even really knowing Tony, Jackson cared for him in such a short time. I can only imagine what they Might talk about. :)
Awesome Job.
AP |
 angry penguin 2009-10-18 . chapter 14Damn. You write emotional scenes wonderfully. I`m very much Evan is dead. I don`t think he would have told anyone anything. |
 angry penguin 2009-10-17 . chapter 13That was just classic Tony and Gibbs. Loved it. |
 angry penguin 2009-10-17 . chapter 12Another awesome chapter. And I really , really hate the Grayson`.
I know. The bigger they are the harder they fall. :) |
 angry penguin 2009-10-16 . chapter 10Frank?? They really want to make sure that Tony is dead. Lol.
You captured Palmer perfectly. |
 angry penguin 2009-10-16 . chapter 9Poor Tony. The road before him is quite long. |
 angry penguin 2009-10-16 . chapter 8Even though they are sleep deprived, I would not want to come up against Gibbs and his team. :)
At least Tony might be safe for awhile now and hopefully the Villains will let their guard down. |
 angry penguin 2009-10-15 . chapter 7Poor McGee. He just can't compare to Tony. Lol. The would be killer dead... The team just can't catch a break can they. :) |
 angry penguin 2009-10-15 . chapter 6Whoo hwoo for that attentive nurse. I can't wait for Evan to go down. |
 angry penguin 2009-10-15 . chapter 5His alibi. Damn that guy is smart. I really hope that Tony has guards. |
 angry penguin 2009-10-14 . chapter 3I was afraid of this. I know this is going to sound very odd, but I do hope that they at least "used" clean needles. Poor Tony. |