:D
Hehe, I probably wouldn't be too happy either if someone made a comment. (If I had 2 fathers or whatever)

I like this story, and love that the people stood up for Jack & Ennis. :D
yay for happy stories. xD

Love your story!
A breath of fresh air... Especially coming from the prospective of a storyteller. Not seen enough in BBM followups.

I like the way you integrated your story perfectly with the details of the OS.
Thank You for the happy ending too. It's great to shead happy tears for a change.

Biggest Hugs to you!

Oh Cowboy, I read this story when it was on the drabble-fest chocolate contest, and you got my vote, hands down! I love this piece, it's so sweet and such a great "what-if" ...

Lovely story, thanks for sharing it. :)

Jen