I forgot to tell you earlier, but Bella is, like, the best Mom ever. How could anyone not love her? Nessie seems like a fun character and nice addition to the story. So, I see a little chemistry there with Jacob maybe. I think I'm falling in love with your Edward. Sure, I'm already married and he's fictional, but we can pretend.

So Bella's being a little mysterious, huh? I can't tell yet if she's as into Edward as he seems to be into her. It's a different perspective reading about all my favorite characters having families. I like it.

I like the banter and am curious to learn more about their backstories. I enjoyed Bella's covert activities and am dying to know what she does for a living.

Really, this story is wonderful and makes me smile while I read it. I think Bella is so funny and love it that Edward is already crushing on her. The kids are adorable.

This is a cute idea and it does remind me of "Holding out for you" in a really good way. This is a lovable group of characters and I like that you've given Bella a quirky personality.

Great great story, really crazy, sweet and funny. I hate Sophie, she was too cute :P
Bella and Edward were a blast, and the neighborhood really... peculiar. I read the story to times in a row.
Checked your blog, the story about Charlie and Bella looks like it's going to be interesting at least.

Great job. Saludos

Goog story I found it
last night..
and finshed it today

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Thank you for writing and sharing this!

Such a perfect proposal for these two! The part at the end with the kids made me cry. Well done you!

Esme is the sweetest mom ever. I really like how your Bella isn't super resistant to the relationship with Edward and becoming part of his family so quickly. Like I said before, it really feels very natural.

I love that Jake is all flustered about Nessie. And that he would talk to Bella about it!

Jake and Nessie are SO going to do it! And I'm all smitten over Edward calling Leo his son. Aw!

Three cheers for Tanya's auto assault! Can you please tell Edward he is welcome sneak into my window anytime?

P.S. Is my reviewing chapters going to get old, or are you going to be pleased as punch once I get you over 50 reviews?

I envy Bella's snark. And slip n' slide, water gun fights AND the zoo? Sounds like a perfect day to me. I want to take Leo and Ethan and Sophie home with me. They are the cutest things ever.

OMG, L-O-V-E that Bella is a smut-writer. I so didn't see it coming!