The ending lines did it for me. Well written.

Aw! That was so sad! Poor Amanda! *sniff*

I've always loved Spock's family, and you've done an amazing job of portraying Amanda here. Not many people have managed to do her justice, but you've done so with aplomb.

Wow. Great job.

Heart-wrenching. Both the scene and your fic. But love survives. Wonderful work.

great one shot! I thought it was so tragic to kill off Spock's mother... although did you notice that both times that Spock let go of his control his mother was threatened?

I'm crying! Ah Poor Spock and Amanda! Thank you so much for writing in her point of view.

*Sniffle* That was really touching! Very nicely written and very emotional.

~Paula