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1world-traveler
2009-10-17 . chapter 18
please update asap
Sir Marshmellow ATE SAMANTHA
2009-10-12 . chapter 18
ive never even read HON but i liked it im sorry im too lazy too login so ill sing me pin name
maya15
2009-09-10 . chapter 7
creepy guys name cud be dunn
singaluva
2009-07-16 . chapter 18
OMG! That was so cool!
Flowerfairy123
2009-07-04 . chapter 18
Awesome story =], can't wait to read the next chapters!
PoisonFaye13
2009-06-27 . chapter 2
Love it!
yoyoemogangsta
2009-06-24 . chapter 10
ugh! APHRODITE IZ MY FAVE CHARAC. BESIDEZ STARK!
yoyoemogagsta
2009-06-24 . chapter 9
"I don't think we're in Oaklahoma anymore!" hahaha HILARIOUS! NICE!
-x- in.luv.with.vamps -x-
2009-06-17 . chapter 18
i thopught tht bryant was suppose to be with kaytlin
but watev tht was awsome
nd neferet, how did i not c tht coming
but i loved it
so looking forward to the sequal
mypseudonymrocks
2009-06-14 . chapter 18
Very good!
I especially liked the mention of Twilight in it lol! I love Twilight so it was quite funny to see it mentioned in the middle of this!
The plot was really good as well, and entertaining. Perhaps for improvement you could use more description, but I really loved your character of Kaitlyn, maybe if you do a sequel you could describe a bit more of her home life and do a bit of romance between Dakota and Kaitlyn and Bryant like a love triangle and she has to decide between them.
anyways keep up the good stories!
VampiresxTeamEdward-Erik
2009-06-10 . chapter 17
she miqht come back
VampiresxTeamEdward-Erik
2009-06-10 . chapter 18
Hahah
that bxtch is back
funny
whew
haha
wait where did she qo
who was the hiqh prietess
Bryant Wolf
2009-06-10 . chapter 15
Nice story Kaitlyn...I didn't know you knew I wanted to hug Camilla...In the next book you should have us date...i mean if she likes me at all...

P.S you smell bad!!
Twilight Girl27
2009-06-09 . chapter 18
damn you
update asap please!
i loved it
VampiresxTeamEdward-Erik
2009-06-09 . chapter 16
No
She rejected the chanqe
No
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