 1world-traveler 2009-10-17 . chapter 18please update asap |
 Sir Marshmellow ATE SAMANTHA 2009-10-12 . chapter 18 ive never even read HON but i liked it im sorry im too lazy too login so ill sing me pin name |
 maya15 2009-09-10 . chapter 7 creepy guys name cud be dunn |
 singaluva 2009-07-16 . chapter 18OMG! That was so cool! |
 Flowerfairy123 2009-07-04 . chapter 18Awesome story =], can't wait to read the next chapters! |
 PoisonFaye13 2009-06-27 . chapter 2Love it! |
 yoyoemogangsta 2009-06-24 . chapter 10 ugh! APHRODITE IZ MY FAVE CHARAC. BESIDEZ STARK! |
 yoyoemogagsta 2009-06-24 . chapter 9 "I don't think we're in Oaklahoma anymore!" hahaha HILARIOUS! NICE! |
 -x- in.luv.with.vamps -x- 2009-06-17 . chapter 18i thopught tht bryant was suppose to be with kaytlin
but watev tht was awsome
nd neferet, how did i not c tht coming
but i loved it
so looking forward to the sequal |
 mypseudonymrocks 2009-06-14 . chapter 18Very good!
I especially liked the mention of Twilight in it lol! I love Twilight so it was quite funny to see it mentioned in the middle of this!
The plot was really good as well, and entertaining. Perhaps for improvement you could use more description, but I really loved your character of Kaitlyn, maybe if you do a sequel you could describe a bit more of her home life and do a bit of romance between Dakota and Kaitlyn and Bryant like a love triangle and she has to decide between them.
anyways keep up the good stories! |
 VampiresxTeamEdward-Erik 2009-06-10 . chapter 17she miqht come back |
 VampiresxTeamEdward-Erik 2009-06-10 . chapter 18Hahah
that bxtch is back
funny
whew
haha
wait where did she qo
who was the hiqh prietess |
 Bryant Wolf 2009-06-10 . chapter 15 Nice story Kaitlyn...I didn't know you knew I wanted to hug Camilla...In the next book you should have us date...i mean if she likes me at all...
P.S you smell bad!! |
 Twilight Girl27 2009-06-09 . chapter 18damn you
update asap please!
i loved it |
 VampiresxTeamEdward-Erik 2009-06-09 . chapter 16No
She rejected the chanqe
No
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