Needs updating, read the first story, now this...and I'd like to read how it continues. Liking it so far!

Well I read the previous story (sorry for not reviewing) and have just ended with this chapter and I have to say this is the most interesting take on 'Obi-Wan was thought dead only to be found again but is suffering from severe issues' plot line I have read yet. It drew me in to the point where I wanted to try and put it on my Ipod so I could read it during the breaks at work (it didn't work by the way, sadly). Please update this soon, I would like to see what happens to Obi-Wan now that he hasd stopped the voices in his head, will it cause more problems for him?

alright. I'm done rambling.

W-K

Ah! Is it the 28th yet?? Very good story!

Oh, go Obi-Wan!! Very excited to see how this all turns out. So, Drrov was Force-sensitive? hmm...I think I kinda suspected...way back when. But yeah, very happy to see a posting. I've been trying to review now for a few days, but Internet's been sketchy. But good job on this one. I enjoyed it, held my breath when it was tense, laughed when it was humourous, cried when it called for it...ok, so I didn't really laugh or cry. But still another well-written piece of Star Wars fiction from Ari :)

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Go Obi! Woot! *cheers*

That was another epically amazing chapter!! Well done!

I want to smack Qui-Gon now... LOL

Kudos!

>Xaja<

aw...that was so beautifully written...I can't wait for the next chapter...it figures that a memory Drrov thought to torment ObiWan with was the one that gave him strength ... and QuiGon just had an epiphany...that should make things better for him and ObiWan also, I would think. He'll be a better master for it, I think. Looking forward to your next chapter!

Obi's Mom

Get him, Obi! Great chapter!!

ok, trying again to leave a review...this is my second attempt...I keep getting an error...

Great chapter...enjoyed it very much..looking forward to seeing how Obi finally destroys that nasty shadow mark that has been tormenting him...and I know he will...he's Obi Wan...:)

Didn't you say in the review reply that the cliffhangars shouldn't get worse or something? I find myself not agreeing with that at the moment...
Obi-Wan be strong!

Wow, this one was intense!! Update soon!

Oh, harsh! Good place to end it...maybe. I did manage to make it in here for this chap...I haven't actually moved YET. I leave in a few days to go north for a week, then I actually fly out to LA...had the dates messed up last time.

Lovely chapter! I've always said you were good at portraying the emotional side of things, and you did wonderfully here. Looking forward to the next one. I've been anxiously awaiting the showdown between Obi-Wan and Drrov!

Wowza! That's intense!

Love this chapter! Interesting Sith techniques there... What's gonna happen to Obi-Wan?

Kudos! Looking forward to the 15th!

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please update this baby much faster than you did its noble and kick ** predecessor. please. 'cause i desperately want to know what happens next to poor obi wan kenobi.


the story is very well written, the plot it gripping, and the characters rock!


i'm really hoping that we'll get to see a lot of jorri and tuuvu (did i spell that right?) in this (soon to be updated xD ) story!


keep writing!

Uhh, why do I have a bad feeling about this? Piell really annoys me, thinking he knows everything and all *gr*
Another cliffhangar *sigh* I guess I should get used to it...

Wow, intense chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one. Have fun on your trip!