lovely story

Hello, I don't typically read Inuyasha, for several reasons that are not important. Anyway, I ran across you and decided to read a little despite my hesitation and I must say I'm impressed. From the few stories I read I can see a definite style and a love for writing, and that is something that makes any story better. Anyway in this particular story I noticed you used 'impervious' incorrectly. Impervious means that it can't be affected by something, I think that the word you were looking for was 'imperative' which means of vital importance. This is when Kagome is thinking about the need to defeat Naraku and finding a spot to focus on for her grand pilates finale. You also wrote 'coming rushing' and 'cocked bobbed' XD. Other than that the mistakes were little and aren't worth noting in this review. It was cute, keep up the good work.

One of the best oneshots I've ever read.Excellent story and sexy as hell.Great writing.

i loved it!
i never really read oneshots but i really loved this one!

hm interesting might have to take up pilates

This was a fun short story. I found myself laughing at some parts and blushing at others. I enjoyed the rhythm of your writing and was never bored or eager to skip ahead. Thanks for the fun.

You know, I almost didn't read this story after the first several paragraphs. I find stories about the "crimsom tide" to be not well done and well, I just don't feel like reading about it.

I'm glad that I stuck with it because this is one of the best one shots I've ever read. I love the texture, the structure and the torture that Sess was feeling as he watched her stretches. I found myself laughing out loud as she kept questioning him about why her. That's such a Kagome thing to do and yet it felt confortable, natural and the mental picture was driving me insane, not to mention the really hot sex! Hot!

Thank you for writing this delightful piece of confection. It makes me wanna do pilates, although I think I'll attract some dork and not hot ** Sessomaru!

Kags357

I actually think you did a great job describing the poses. Well written and interesting concept.


~Kat

Oh mi goodness great story you should totally add like a sequel or something though but still love it

damn it makes me want to take up pilates after reading this.

Excellent and good humor and very hot!

Well that was certainly unlike any other lemony readings I have had of these two. It was indeed very humorous too, lol.
Bravo once again my friend C;
Ja ne!
Jasmine xoxo /'.'\

o0o0o0o so good, must do another.

This one-shot was absolutely hot! I wish that there was more to read! Great job!

Oh my GOD!! I LOVE THIS. I'm going to start doing Pilates NOW! xD

This just happened to be one of the greatest lemons I have ever read...In fact, I'm still so dizzy from imagining what you wrote! Thank God nobody's in the house or they would have heard my girlish squeal when I read that last part. Tee-hee. :D

The Kama Sutra huh? xD Nice part to add!

Ooh, I think one of my favorite parts was when Inuyasha said “It’s a damn good thing he was there to save your sorry **, otherwise you would have been **.”

I laughed my ** off when I read their reactions. :))

LK