Awesome little ditty. Could so be a Canonical moment. :)

BB

brilliant story!

i really liked the peter/olivia stuff.

;D

I love this little conspiracy between Broyles and Nina...so deliciously devious!

and Nina's line near the end, "We're lying to everybody"

Very intriguing ;)

I like it alot...outstanding work!

that was so good! please tell me that you plan to continue this story?

fabulous :D

well-written and eerily possible