Well, I have to admit. This story is tremendously good! One of the best story I have read since I found this site! The only thing I found wrong in this fic was of Negi wanting sex. That's all.

Beautiful story... there really aren't enough of these fics out there. Excellent job.

And at ten years old I was a perfect gentleman. With regards to my conduct around women I still am.

I say this because I'm getting a tad sick of people going on about how Negi 'couldn't possibly' be a perfect gentleman.

It isn't nearly as hard as people think, also for most people I've known who were raised in that fashion (I was hit with a spiky stick whenever I was unchivalrous XD)treat it as a matter of personal pride and respect.

But it's your story and it's a great one (I just love the idea of a handgun sticking out of Mana's bathing supplies), just saying that being a perfect gentleman is certainly possible. And that's that.

You write well, please let me 'borrow' your brain.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.

hehehe, that's good story, i do think that Ayaka should have some Negi lovin' for a change, but I'm more of a Eva, Chachamaru, Yue, Nodoka and Kaede pairings or even Setsuna and maybe Chisame, but this story is great please write more, more lol.

From Negima fan.

Great story, This is one of the few decent AyakaNegicentric fics I've read, and having the whole class, save for Ayaka, got pactiofied by Negi, and some Takane...er, Stripper bashing in it, I just have to say this is friggin awesome in many levels aye?

Ahahaha. Nice. XD I love Ayaka hehe. She and Negi would make a hot couple XP

This is a good fic!
No wonder Negi's a chick magnet!
Good work Ayaka!
And good work to you Ambrant! This is quite a romantic fic! *Two thumbs up for you pal*

I love this! You really captured their feelings well! It was incredibly well written and its so romantic. Really awesome to see them being paired together and just being the two of them without any interference from others. I'm glad you made this, and allowing Negi to be with her.

10/10 for ya! Too bad there's not much Negi and Ayaka stuff. I wish other authors would make more of these.

Great history! But I hope you could back to write about Teen Titans, I loved your histories with Raven and Robin.

lol, 35. Probz your nephews would know more. I think kids these days... (dot dot dot) haha.

Anyways, good story, but i have to point out. Seriously, Negi is 10 years old, how would he have a 'muscular' figure.

Even with unreal amount of training, I think associating muscle to a 10yearold is abit akward. PLUS, I reckon you hit second base abit too early, by the way-second base is touching (You get the gist of it).

Good luck, continue on...

Awesome! I was looking for something to beat away the boredom
and this just popped up on the page from out of nowhere. Four chapters of well thought out story telling, and with Ayaka of all characters. I can't tell you how long I've been looking for one of these.

Seeing this makes me feel like a lazy bum...ah, damn writer's block. Anyway, a great addition to your collection. I'll be waiting for more...like a...I don't know...Eva one-shot?

...Just sayin'.

Fortunately less breathtaking that the ku fei chapter. just as well since i dont think i could take two of those so close to the end of semester.

i found disbelief hard to suspend regarding negi's ... maturity, to begin with but somehow the thought grew on me and by the end of the bath scene i was buying it.

on a side note - ive been watching lyrical nanoha again lately and today i had the rather incogruous thought that pactios rather resembled a mixture of devices (minus the AI of course) and lost logia. now i cant get the image of the TSAB trying to capture negi and chamo as exciting specimens who can create new lost logia type artefacts. :S

~ja ne

While I can't quite put this into the awesome category, after all there's "Child of Mine" to compare with, it's always enjoyable to read one of your stories. And as an Ayaka fan, I thank you for making sure the class rep gets a little lovin' this time. Hope to read the next one soon.

Let me be one of those over 90 doods who gush over your awesomeness.

While Ayaka is an oft uncelebrated character, I"d say Kafka brought her back into the limelight, and she's been getting slightly more attention since. I think I dig it. Heck I introduced Ayaka into the fold in my latest.

We miss you at the TS and on MSN, man! You should come back when you get a chance.

I rather like this story, so keep on keepin' on~

Wow what a great ending for this fic. Since you put Takane in this last chap I hope you make a short story for her too. Don't really remember if you did one for her and Negi in A Day In Door's since its been a while. I've read over those one shots quite a few times but since there's so many its kinda hard to remember which was which. Well if you write more of these I'll probably read em so I hope you post soon.