I find it VERY hard to believe that Takuto would just...sit there...after learning of a possible kidnap plot.

No, strike that, I find it difficult to believe that Lulu would ANNOUNCE IN ADVANCE that she was coming to kidnap Ranpha!

But I'll forgive you for now, because you now have the honor of writing the first Takuto+Ranpha on ! We've had Milfeulle pairings, Mint pairings, Vanilla pairings, a Chitose pairing or two, and even a Forte pairing, but no Ranpha pairings until now. So I'll forgive your mistakes, just for that, and I look forward to more chapters!

great first three chapters and you had better believe it missy! haha, don't you dare let this die because we sure did with the swine flu story :((

:) awesome beginning SamSam. although Ranpha said that she was fine standing by the door in the start, but then in the end you have her rising from her chair to leave. you also spelled 'among' wrong in the title XD
you know how i am with typos! anyway, awesome job!