 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 17Good story. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 16And so the stage is set for a sequel even if John Bradford Horn won't be starring in it front and center? |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 15Good to have Hawke back where he belongs. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 14Not sure which is a scarier thought, Hawke in his present mindset with a gun or without... |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 13“I just hope,” said Archangel sourly, “that that nibble doesn’t turn out to be more like a shark bite.”
Nice turn of phrase. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 11Obsession might be the right word. Quite frankly I think Dom has every reason to be concerned.
Good story overall, bit blunt for my taste at times, but well-written. Not sure if Dom's entirely in character somehow though...Know Hawke could be nigh unto impossible to get to open up, but Dom seems a little more hands off than I would have pictured him considering their past history. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 10Glad to see things taking turn or the better...well, except for Elena's toyota. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 9Unexpected twist, nicely done. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 8Reason for panic... |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 7Here's hoping... |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 6Well, progress is progress however it comes. Glad to see glimmers of the old Stringfellow Hawke back.
Intriguing read so far. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 5Geesh, whoever thought we'd be GLAD to see Anjelica Horn? |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 4Sounds like String's going to need more than a little determination to get out of this one...maybe Elena? |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 3Some hope at last...I think. |
 Ladyhawke 620 2009-07-21 . chapter 2More disturbing than the last...poor String. Am liking that dr. less and less. |