LOL! Great job.

There is a couldn;t somewhere in there. Anyways, that sure was sweet. I think that one took the pain of their own uncles death and worked it into the fanfic nicely. Sometimes it is the things in our own lives that inspire us to write! :)

aww I could totally see this happening!! So real and they are totally in character!! x3 once again you did great :D

this very good,too bad it,s a One shot.