I love this one it is awsome and could you please extend it please i love your work

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Please please write more oh and can some one help me i found a fanfic its kind of like this one but its longer and Jen and Luke become girlfriend/Boyfriend

Yes a romantic story with Luke and Jen thank you

the person who wrote this fanfiction

This is probaly the cutest fanfiction i have read on here. Make more plz. :D

hey

What, no... They're kids. Plus Luke wouldn't have the balls to ask, ad even if he did, Jen would murder him. And the kids part, would murder both of them. Go fap to your luke/jen porn somewhere else.

I personally find this pretty damn adorabal. You should really write more in this. I always supported the Luke/Jen paring, plus Jen was always one of my favorite book characters. Nice job on this. Only thing that bugged me is that Luke is a bit too OOC. He should have been a bit shyer.

Aww... It's so sweet!

Above is my fanfiction account name, but I can't submit a review under it because it is a major glitch with my computer or my fanfiction account. This works though.

I don't know how you did it and I don't care. All I can say is I'm ecstatic that you managed to bring Jen back. I hope there'll be more chapters because I'll definitely keep looking. I bawled my eyes out when Jen died and you've brought her back. YAAAAYYY! 'Cause when Jen died, the books just weren't the same. Nina was okay, but not the same as Jen. Jen was plucky and stubborn and just like me. To have her die was like losing a book sister. Again. (As you might have guessed, I get very attached to my book characters.) I hugged the book to comfort Luke and if I printed this story, I'd be hugging it too. That is the highest compliment I can pay you. Your story is officially the greatest for bringing Jen back.

By the way, enjoy my showers of praise. I don't give them often. In other words, normally I don't flip out quite this much. :)

I'll be watching for more chapters. There better be some for me to read. Even if I have to beta read it myself.

they shoulda haad sex, then they wud hav unwanted children!

Whoa! I never thought that Luke would act like that.

WHOA!

Great story. I love it. You should add more to it.

i liked it, but i think you should have added a bit more detail. and there is a bit off OOC-nes that takes away from it. good job though. i like the over-all point.

I don't like how it is like them like kissing-They barely knew each other and Luke would have still fought by Jen's side if she was there-But aside from that it was good 4/5

i love the story its so romantic and i like jen. i just wish that she hadnt died. then again that is what brought me to read the rest of the series. love the story. you should write more. add on. so far so awesome.

Impressed, the nessfan is. The sole Luke/Jen FanFiction was fascinating. Sadly, there is not one in the actual Shadow Children saga. The nessfan highly recommends the author to write more...