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Gocaclleta
2009-09-29 . chapter 1
... I LOVE YOU FOR MAKING THIS *bows down to you epic epicness* Im sorry,just when i read the series in fifth grade, i really, and i mean REALLY wanted luke and jen to kiss, it heartbroken me when jen died, so you are epic for writing this! VIVA LA LUKE/JEN! *starts singing viva la vida*
crazycrazygirl999
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
i loved it! After i read the whole series i wanted jen to come back and fall in love with luke so bad! I was excited to read this story because i knew that my wish would be fufilled!
bookluva108
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
This story is so sweet!I hated it when Jen died!
imlost911
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
I thought that was really cute! You should write more!
Pokemon 17
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
Wow. Good story. Needs work though. Write more!

-Pokemon 17-
out of the ashes
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
Don't end it here! I want to know what happens! This sounds very cute.
Amethyst Asheryn
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
The only qualm I have with this is that the romance seems sort of in-your-face, you know? I think making it a little more subtle might help. I'd even say make the story a little less brief, because that way you can build up to the kiss instead of just dropping it on us.

Also, it seemed just a little bit choppy--like the sentence fluency wasn't quite right. But it wasn't *bad*, so I wouldn't worry about that too much.

You gotta love those ten-minute stories. :)

Ashe
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