Ah! It's so good!
I loved Edmund's panic in saving his 'little big' brother and then his freaking out when Peter collapses.
I love the tenderness between the two brothers!
Spectacular job!

Nice story--clearly, both brothers are dreaming as the other as much younger and in need of care--that's how close their bond is.

:D As good as ever.

Thanks.

*wipes tears* What is it about your stories that always have me reduced to a babbling crying mess?
Wonderfully written!I just love the way that they love each other so much!If only more people were like that...The world would be a better place...

This story was so sweet and pure and angsty and wonderful...truely, I absolutly loved it. Your description was vivid, your characterization was believable, and each word brought me closer and closer to your story and plot. ^_^ Excllent job, and I really hope that you'll continue writing Narnia fics, because I treasure each one! Bye! ^_^

That was gorgeous! The idea of the younger Peter in Edmund's dreams was a great way of showing that Ed maybe still feels a bit protective of his elder brother, and vice versa. The interaction between the two is achingly convincing. Outstanding.

Cute.

I enjoyed it. Really lovey writting, except for swearing Jesus. Swearing God also bothers me. But I really do like your writting.

loved it except for Peter swearing in Jesus' Name.

Narniachick

WOW! you impressed me again...

great idea, breathtaking story... I hope you`ll never stop writing!!

HQJ

Okay now I'm totally creeped out. Today, I was looking for something to read and it was FEVER DREAMS! And now I've read the sequel to it. What a delicious treat for me.

This is just too funny: Furthermore, they always have some sort of annoyingly bright light at the end of them. Usually, it means he’s managed to land himself within inches of death again.

“Of course, if certain big brothers would stop insisting on being idiotically noble, I might see less of them.”

That was just TOO FUNNY! Great job and thank you for the surprise sequel.

That was quite the interesting dream, and after getting a description of Peter's homecoming I can see why Edmund is so upset. That is quite upsetting.

I really liked this. Great job!

Little Peter and older Edmund is a great concept I've read something that involved it and it was great just like this sequel, I hope you update your other fics soon though.

It's great!!
I loved it.
lg Luna

Brilliant, as per usual. I really do enjoy your stories.

~ Rose and Thorn