Alice swore? *snickers*

'I was afraid, very afraid.' lol I loved it, especially his thoughts on carlisle's parenting.

I LOVE THIS! CAN'T STOP READING IT! :)

fantastic. love it. i wish i knew what alice said to the teacher.

Absolutely loved it! I would love more, but it was really excellent.

i love it, very original. do you think you could expand on it? maybe add a few more chapters or write others like this? i really do love it and cant stop reading it again and again and again...

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cute! I liked it. good job!

I like this story. I'd REALLY like to read it from some other POV's...Edwards, Alice's, Jasper's...heck, if you'll write a chapter for all of them, I will faithfully read and review.

I really enjoyed this story. It was just perfect how the principal misinterpreted everything Carlisle and Esme did or said. I felt so indignant when he had the nerve to think that Carlisle doesn't care about his family! Like most of those on the outside, he completely misses the bond between them.

It was the perfect touch when Carlisle threatened to pull all the kids out of school over that stupid book. If I were one of them, it would make me feel so safe to hear that.

I love stories that center on the family, and this was perfect in that it showed a small piece of everyone's relationship. Thanks for sharing with us!

aw I love it! why does it havet to be complete? can you make it uncomplete? PLease for me?

What were the bad words alice says?

This is so good!

good story

this is hilarious! you should write more scenes from random onlookers pov's like this.