Thanks! Why don't you write a sequence. I hate tezuka in this story. he does not deserve the love of fuji. He betrayed Fuji. He said that fuji was no longer important

omg i love the song xD and i love ur story...it's great...but kinda sad xD
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viva-chan

I first saw this at LJ, and from there, I saw that you have an FFNet account, so I came here since I prefer to keep fanfics and their related stuff here. When I saw your LJ screen name, I thought it was familiar, and that was confirmed when I came here. I might have read some of your past fics.

You almost drove me to tears, but I'm glad they got everything settled. I hope Echizen really ended up loving Momoshiro back. I like how you had Captain Tezuka and Echizen in the same school as the rest of the team instead of different countries.

Good job on the feelings! However, I find Captain Tezuka and Echizen OOC. They are not the type to lose self-control and just follow their feelings like that, especially on love. I guess you needed to do that for your fic to fit a song.