Nice chapter, I really enjoyed the depth of the fight scenes.

Yes! This story is off to a fantastic start and it promises to be just as good if not better than its predecessor! I look forward to the next chapter and keep up the great work!

its great to see you back man. I gotta say i really liked this chapter. it was well written, has good grammar, and the action was high calibur. the only thing i have to criticize is the skips in-between groups or people. one moment i was reading Sasuke, then all the sudden i was reading Akari. it was a lil confusing at first but i got used to it. IM wondering also about Naruto's outfit. you've never explained it and im wondering how it looks like. well keep up the good work.

4/5 stars (needs to be truly epic to earn 5)

Another great chapter of another great story.

Itachi is going to be screwed without his Sharingan

Yay! uber awesome tournament!

Come out with the next chapter already! It's been a month!

aweomse

A good start. I can't wait to see how this story turns out.

very well written, please update soon.

Yes :D! I have been looking forward to this story and the first chapter did not disappoint! Very well written and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

Im really excited about this story. All of the other tournament fics i have read were always be so... predictable and writen by rookie writers. Im really glad to see an original approach to it, and to an high calibur writer like yourself writing it? Yeah, im very happy. The only thing I have to ask is that, though you gave physical description for Hidan and Sasuke, are you gonna describe the physic/appearance of all the other characters? I hope so.

good fic