Good writing, but a little quick for this to happen, don't you think? Add some interaction between Faramir/Eowyn in between Chapters 2 and 3 and this will seem more believable. Don't write things because you think the plot is going to slowly; if it's good, the pace will come naturally.

how about a huge battle were its like the pirates of the Caribbean 3, you know the whole battle on the flying Dutchman were will and elizabeth gets hitched. that would be cool!

then faramir's horrid father would die.( please kill Grima too )

then show them in like a few years past were their all happy!

let me know!

LOVE IT!

I can think of a couple of ways in which Faramir could get back to Minas Tirith, but each then influences what might happen next. For instance, if Faramir was roaming alone in the wilds and came across Eomer's camp then that would be one way for him to get to MT and also for Eomer to find out what happened. Or Faramir could resign himself to going back to his father believing that he has nothing to live for. Then his father would criticize him for beleiving in Eowyn and send him directly to the front lines where he might encounter Eomer and Eowyn. It really depends on if you have developed the ending of the story and if any of these ideas work with that. Good luck!

love this story. please continue!

Such surprising developments, this was one of the best chapters, I went through the whole rang of emotions while reading it. I was so happy when Faramir stood up for himself and separated himself from his father. Then I was crushed that Theoden denied him and that Eowyn didn't stand up for him, but I guess that would be very improper. Then when Eowyn told him the truth I was crushed. I know he should be upset, feel guilty and hopeless, but hopefully things will start to turn around. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

I see that Grima had started to convince Theoden that it was a good idea to go to Gondor, that was a good way of getting them there. I was surprised Eowyn didn't put on her armor in secret and go too. I hope that Faramir can convince his father or be done with him.

i have never read a lotr fic and for my first one i choose a damn good one! keep up the good work :D

I definitely like the second idea the best, I am not sure whether you would consider having Eowyn go so that she could have more insight into Faramir's family. I know that it is against tradition for a woman to be a representative of her family, but there might be some way for her to travel with Eomer. I think that then there could be discussion between Theoden, Eown and Eomer about what to do with Faramir.

I would like to see you continue this story. Is it possible to put up some of your ideas on your profile page and then we could look and comment? I definitely thinks there needs to be the confrontation between Faramir and Theoden but I would like to see what you were thinking.

Good chapter, I feel so bad for Eowyn and Faramir that they are bound to be loyal to their families and follow orders. I can only hope that Theoden will understand when Faramir has his chance to explain.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what will happen when Faramir goes to Edoras, update quickly!

Great cliffhanger with Boromir and I loved that Eowyn due to her distress was finally opening herself to her emotions and the fact that she might love Faramir. I keep wondering what pain in her past has kept her heart so closed, is it Grima or just fear of losing those she loves? Update soon!

Oh poor Eowyn she is just very confused. I liked the chapter and hope that there is more from Eowyn's POV.

I feel that something is going on that maybe Denethor is up to his usual tricks. I am also intrigued and want to know what Boromir is up to, could it be that he knows that the whole goal of the trip is to have Faramir and Eowyn fall in love and so he is just biding his time? Good explanation of the kiss I can't wait to hear more from Eowyn's POV.