What on earth kind of powers could Kim possibly have?? 0.o Hm...

Whatever it is, I look forward to find out. 8D

Thanks for the update! Completely forgot this story till now. Love it! Update!

i so hate kim in this chapter

por shego i love her love her very match very match

love more love it love it love it love it more

love it

Very interesting story.

Yes, Kim has no superhuman powers, but she has the almost inhuman ability to master complex physical disciplines in less time than regular persons; that's how she could master 16 kung fu styles before finishing high school.

Keep the good writing.

VERY NICE

Where to start... Ron, never liked him, never will. It didn't have to be that way; I blame Disney. KP and Ron still makes me ill. I also blame Disney for this. These things won't change, which kinda surprises me that I'm reading a KP/Ron fic without the faintest glimmer of any KiGo. This puzzles me. Unless it's to watch KP and Ron get what's coming to them (in spades).

On to new business:

I must say, Ron and KP could stand to be taken down a peg or two (or a lot). Ron's unsettling god-complex (one man's "cleanse" is another man's genocide) and Kim's elitist b*tch attitudes are REALLY grating. As they stand, they could both die horribly and I'd really not care. They are rather unsympathetic characters. The "good guys" are anything but at this moment -their hypocrisy is staggering. Neither of them are recognized law enforcement, yet they dole out vigilante justice without due process under the law or accountability/prosecution for their actions.

Shego. The one character I actually care about. So far, Kim's so-called "powers" are pretty lame/weak (whatever the "on-factor" is). Unless the on-factor is the thing that a) keeps her alive despite overwhelming and impossible odds or b) makes her "anything is possible" credo true... Yeah, lame powers. Cuz right now, it looks like not only did Shego get the short end of the stick, but KP and Ron broke it off in her a$$.

And with Shego takin' sh*t from everyone, especially getting kicked while she's down *ahem, Kim and Ron*, I dearly hope she deals some SERIOUS payback. None of this was her fault.

I hope we get to find out more about this as I'm interested to see what, if any, are the consequences.

ho ho ho. Kim's being bad. I hope she gets some consequences for her actions hahaha. I can see Team Possible going rogue actually...

but enough of my guessing. Keep it up and I hope to read a new chapter soon! :D

happy to see a second chapter of this. interesting to see someone play up on kim's no-so-nice dark side again, that usually gets downplayed.

This was a very informative chapter. I long suspected that Shego's emotional state had something to do with how she used her powers.

Poor Shego avoiding emotional attachment because it makes you think of others besides yourself. I really don't think that she is that shallow; some emotional pain there perhaps?

Ron has stepped up here in a big way. Forceful, decisive and above all keeping Kim as safe as he can given the circumstances. That little confession to Shego tells a lot about his feelings about the Warholk and Warmonga sitch. Shego seemed surprised that Ron loved Kim as much as he does. The revelation seemed to shock her somewhat.

I do like your Shego. Here a she is at her snaky, enraged, and unforgiving self. Full of rage over her loss and homicidal toward Drakken. Her physically slapping around Drakken showed a savagery that is usually not portrayed here. It was a bold move and helps to define her character
a little more fully.

Kim gave Shego a flaming finger? Not sure if it's in character but is was amusing.

So Kim never thought about the green skin problem? I hope that doesn't happen.Green skin with red hair; clash city.

I enjoyed this update and the story so far keep up the good work. I don't usually read you stuff, so it's been a delightful surprise and a tribute to your skill that you could portray a paring you don't like so well.

Oh Kim acted like then anti-hero here and she is gonna surely regret the desicion she made soon enough, heh heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

LOL OMG You so have to update soon! this story is already rockin'! XD

Oh, man it's great to see you writing another KP story, even if it's your only one for 2009. You know, I think I took you off my Author's Alert, so I didn't even know about this story. I'm just glad I looked at you Profile page and noticed it.

Anyway, interesting opening chapter. We know what Kim was able to do with Hego's power, but now she's got the most dangerous of the five. And now Shego is powerless... or is she? I can tell this is going to be fun!

Good stuff! I'm looking forward to the next chapter... whenever you get around to it.

Good stuff, I'd like to see where this is going :)