OMG I CRYED!!
GREAT JOB!!-stands up and claps with tears are still in eyes-
please continue!

Oh no! I want to know why/how Usami died. :( That stupid Sumi! Yes, please include some sort of happy ending (U&M must always be together, don't want harm to befall either of them). Nice job for your first JR!

wow, this story is gonna be really intense isn't it? Well, its an awesome start. Your style is amazing. You nail down all the descriptitions real well, and the story itself is excellent.

I look forward to the angstyness of the next chapter:)

~Cheyanne

That's really interesting!
I hope you upload soon!
And I really much more like when Sempai has obsession about Misa than Usami!

this is really interesting so far. i can't believe that Akihiko died!

T-T...

the summary caught my attention. i hope that more is coming soon! ^^