amazing story!

To be honest, I thought the first chapter or so was really corny and stuff, but I really love how it ended.

Tarah xXx

You darling hardly know how to write let alone fiction... You have completely ignored about the immense wealth, abilities and intelligence... You have completely pooped out all the details that make them twilight write rubbish i dunno who awarded you...but if i had a computer i would have whooped your ass.
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You darling hardly know how to write let alone fiction... You have completely ignored about the immense wealth, abilities and intelligence... You have completely pooped out all the details that make them twilight write rubbish i dunno who awarded you...but if i had a computer i would have whooped your ass.
p.s. Please stop writing. Contact me on

Oh my god! What a fantastic way to end the story, it wasso romantic and beautiful!

I'm welling up inside! :')

Bravo on the excellent story you are an incredible and talented writer :)

Hey what a great story!

I found the video for this on youtube by chance and now I began reading the story I'm immediately captivated and eager to find out what happens next!

Congratulations on writing this incrediable story and I can't wait to read more of it so I'm gonna do that right now! ;)

loved it!

aw man. I want to see the werewolves jump the volturi from behind.

wow really good so far.

This has got to be on my list of the top 3 favorite stories I have ever read on this site. It was amazing

Yay! I'm so glad that Bella woke up! I can't wait to start the sequel!

WTF do they mean? Is this like some sort of vision? Is he daydreaming? I have to know!

Please let Bella wake up! I just want there to be a happy ending.

I hope you know by now how much I love your story, and I am also a writer a fanfic so I know how important it is to get feedback from your audience, which is why I review everything I read on this site. I'm glad you enjoy my feedback.

On to my review: That was such a beautiful moment between Charlie and Edward. It made me smile. I loved it. It does make me sad to think that once Bella and Edward get married, they won't be with Charlie anymore. But at least they have his blessing.

Your cliffhangers are killing me!

Will Bella be changed or will by some miracle she actually survive this whole ordeal? I need to know!