This sounds great so far. I hope you do continue.

O how sinfully sexy! Update again soon :D

I would like to see this story continued.

i really like the start of this story. its really well written. i especially like the title :) one of my favorite songs from my favorite band! the only suggestion i have for you is that maybe you should start to stray away from midnight sun because right now, except for the whole tanya thing and certain more mature themes, they sound sort of similar. if you make your story an original plot, i think people will really love it because your writing is great.