ah! tear fest!

-sighs- Haldir is suddenly sexist, is he? I'm done skimming this.

For the love of God or whatever you value on this good Earth, please look at what you wrote again. Tenth Walker stories are a dime a dozen, and they shouldn't even be worth a penny.

Your grammar skills are much better than that of many - but Mary Sues are simply... well, pretty much hated.

The 'I had to prove myself' line from Alandria wasn't needed; in fact, it was rather cliche.

This is pretty much plagarism, even if you've already said you don't own LoTR. Oh, wait - you didn't.

If you wish to reply, I have an account on here by the same name I've given.

Salut.
-Sable

Hello!

Wonderful writing! Your writing style is very fluent and descriptive! I liked her response at the Council of Elrond, about the speed of the Rohirrim. That was well written. Just a tiny little tip. I noticed that you did this very well in some parts, but only a few parts, not. For some of the paragraphs, maybe you could try spacing out a bit? Just a suggestion. I'm sorry if I offended you. :(
But, anyhow, a magnificent story with really great writing!

Can't wait to read the sequel!

-RiverOtter1

I'm deeply depressed that this story ended. You have to put out the sequel! MUST!! (You notice how i'm talking all old fashoned) lol. Loved the story, and It was a good choice letting Boromir die. When i first started reading, I was hoping for him to live, But when i read it this way.. It turned out feeling more.. Deep, and Real! This is SOO going on my FAVS!

are you going to write more, or is it over? It was a really good story.

i agree! some of the best romantic stories are trageties. i was crying at then end, but that is to be expected. it was amazing. sad, but amazing.

i think the only think i was really sad about was the fact that u ended it the way u did. it seems like u could keep on writting, but at the same time, im not sure i want to know what else u would do. so im glad u ended it the way u did.

Another really good chapter, keep up the good work!
choirbandgeek

wow!

awsome chapter!
and if those arrows hit in the same places as the movie...i think Boromir could survive! at least i sure hope so!

"Watch the camp, stay quiet." hmm, somehow I don´t think she´ll be doing that... anyway, good chapter :)

... update soon? :)

its a really good chapter, im just afraid of what is going to happen next...

i guess ill just have to wait and see!
great story by the way!

WOW!
this is amazing! especially for a filler!
i love it and can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you for listening to my advice. As for the story, my thoughts can be summarized in one word: more

hope :) I think they say that if you lose hope you lose everything, but as long as you have even the tiniest bit of hope..
:)
anyway, good chapter :)
...update soon?

sad!
i am not sure yet what i think?!?!?!
i mean i love ure story, but im not sure about boromir...
great job!
cant wait for the rest!