Reviews for Heman Naruto
Serenity Maxwell 2/23/10 . chapter 16
i am so glad you explained what was going on because i got confused, lol. awesome job.
god of all 2/8/10 . chapter 16
Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue this story soon.
Deathmvp 2/8/10 . chapter 16
Great chapter. I love how he Snow balled Kakashi in this chapter. One thing is I though at first I missed a chapter and had to go back to make sure I did not.
DarkRavie 2/8/10 . chapter 16
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Malix2 2/8/10 . chapter 16
Nice new chapter. At first I thought I had accidentally missed a chapter or something, but I guess not, you just wrote it that way, and revealed what happened in a flashback. Keep up the excellent work. :)
Guest 2/8/10 . chapter 16
God this story is GAY and a waste of time here is a request please update "Rise of the Black Flames" or just remove the story since you would rather update stupid stories like this one oh yeah update stories you already have then post new ones and and actually update the top stories you have in the poll
King Hawke 1/15/10 . chapter 15
things are getting more interesting. I can't wait to see who Skeletor is disguised as. having Konoha pull that trick on Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke was dirty fighting, but it made things more unpredictable. keep up the good work. oh, and just a minor critique: you keep putting "quite" where you mean "quiet" and "thrown" where you want "throne".
c im am a dragon 1/13/10 . chapter 15
good
Hiroshima Namikaze 1/8/10 . chapter 15
damn keep this going its a good story.
Hiroshima Namikaze 1/8/10 . chapter 14
so everyone is finding out that naruto is royalty and now their going after him. Kinda shallow isnt it? I can understand hinata but damn jounin's too? now look hinata is being decieved too.
Hiroshima Namikaze 1/4/10 . chapter 13
i want sakura's weapon!
Hiroshima Namikaze 1/4/10 . chapter 12
:D and yet mizuki is still evil.
god of all 1/4/10 . chapter 15
Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.
goku 1/3/10 . chapter 15
why do your stories all have needlessly complacated time travel? great story but all this time travle again and again just *sighs*
Deathmvp 1/3/10 . chapter 15
I love this chapter. I also have to say this is one of the most beliveable reasons for Naruto to willingly give up being a nija of his home (aka to save it).
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