OMAEDMUND!

Wery good, just as cold as they must have been. reminds me of the Roman Emperors, many of them were just like that(but not all).

Jadis should be smacked more often. hehe. Good chapter, and update soon! )

Very good! What an intriguing start. I'm looking forward to see where this goes nex.

OH MY GOD! that was great! but kind of scary, but amazing at the same time! i loved it! the emotions are so ture, and real.

again, loved it

tennessee

Oh, my gosh! That's just...there's no other word for it...chilling! It makes me shiver just to read it! Br!

I can see Jadis doing that. Good first chapter, and keep on writing! )

Eep, now there's someone I wouldn't want to meet down a dark corridor! Well done, I can't wait for the next bit!