Very dark and strange... these are not the usual vampires! But, so imaginative and uniquely written. I really enjoyed this very alternate universe!

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Interesting...

Hahahah he is such a sweet little pussy when hes not the sexy Vamppsycho that fucks her...

I bet that she is NOT crying! I bet she talks with alice about the WOW-Fuck!

So... I wish this little You-are-afucking-Vamp-this-is-so-fucking-sexy-Chat would come later in the story. Its all so fast and where the fuck was carlisles? has he gone? yes? than sorry i dont remember. I want to read more. NOW. So im reading NOW more. ;)

So, here is a little Fanfic Writer from Germany which loves Darkward and say sorry for her english, but you must read my shit from now on on the end of every chapter, so... you have to endure it.

So, she wants that he fucks the shit out of her... he is all; NO bella and than jummy jummy Bella... and that all happens in this little chapter... That sounds good and I have to read the next, so bye!

DonBoth

This fanfic was fucking perfection. Maybe the best I've ever read. Sexy, but not shallow. Detailed and well-written. Every Bella/Edward fan should read this. Hope you see this review. (:

I feel god-awful for getting this far without reviewing, but I must say-I much prefer your version to the original. You are an incredible writer; I nearly choked on envy when I read the words "This is my first fanfic" earlier on... pity that you seem to have given this up... but I understand. Nonetheless, you weave a beautiful, sexy tale. Bravisima!

Oh my good!

Very engaging

Esme is a cunt.

what a douche carlisle is

omg so sad, but intriguing and well written

bet shes having post sex bliss