Lord have mercy you kill me with your writing (in a good way). "...untying the loosely tied restraint from his ankle...drifted in and out of fitful sleep in between the bouts of the nausea, extreme restlessness, chills and severe muscle spasms." Phew! You almost killed me with that paragraph alone. LOL

Another great line "...he wanted to be alone. At least in the shower there was that illusion at least." You are the Queen of angst! :D

Loved how Amber brought House's father into it. "You really are as pathetic as your father says you are. I don't even know why I bother." Great stuff!

Another great line "He walked with difficulty, as if each step was an ordeal:"

Cuddy was the best throughout the last two chapters. I sure do wish you'd reconsider writing more. House is still hallucinating. I'd love to see more. I do understand not having enough time for everything, though. Good stuff. Thanks for the ride. It was a blast! :D

OMG, I took the last two chapters of this story with me to the beach this weekend and I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it and how sorry I was to see it come to an end. I literally screamed "NO". Just like House did. LOL

This chapter was so gut wrenching. The beginning alone with "There seemed to be blood. Everywhere." had me racing to read the rest. So fast, I read every other word and had to go back and read it again. LOL

Loved this line when Dr. Croft says "Let's let Dr. House wake up a bit." Don't know why. I guess because House is out of it and you can tell by the way the line is written that Dr. Croft suspects something and is trying to protect House some how.

Also loved House's conversation with Amber while Dr. Croft waited for House to explain. I love the way you wrote this.

So many great lines "House hated this more than the detox. The wind knocked from his sails, House sunk back into the bed, his eyes closed against another wave of nausea. Croft saw it and handed him the emesis bowl." Phew! :D

OMG! This was the icing on the cake "No. No restraints. You can't…". Greatest update ever! :)

Oh, no! Please don´t quit this story.
I was hoping that your story would accompany me until the start of the sixth season of House M.D.. :(
It was a pleasure to read your wonderful new chapter and it is so sad, that that is the last chapter.
I hope that you will find time and passion to continue this great story some day.

Good luck with your new writing project!

Hey!
This was fantastic!
So sad it's over but congrats on your new writing opportunity!
Can't wait to hear more about it!
Much love.
HA

Great chapter, so sad to see this story go. I love your writing. I hope at some point you can come back to it.

Well, I'm definitely sad to see this story end so quickly.

But the ending is beautiful, in a very sad and realistic way. Look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Oh no! September is so far away. Oh well, I love your writing. I just melt away into the story. You have these characters done pat. Thank you so much making the "House" withdrawal (mine, not his) not as bad as it could be. I will be looking forward to your next story.

awesome!

that was very very well written, great work! Yeah sure it was a bit abrupt, but I think it's the perfect place to stop. Looking forward to reading more of your work whether on here or elsewhere :)

I think you know if you end it here there will be serious repercussions. Your fans will follow you and harrass you. You may even start experiencing hallucinations and delusions.

That said, good luck with your new writing project...and keep us posted about that.

Cheers,Maineac

I DID enjoy this ride! Very well paced and nicely done. Good luck with your new project!

well, you know what? i think i like the way you wrote that and the way it ends.
i mean, i like it when they do all the recovery the "back-to-princeton" but it gives false hope to smtg we will obviously not be prepared for...
you stay pretty neutral in a very housian-way: perfect combination!
thanks!!

this is the end?

Depressing, but very fitting ending of the story.

Thanks for the ride, I enjoyed every step of the way... If 'enjoying' is in any form the appropriate term for it.

To say it with Cuddy: Detoxing is 'the easy part' Means, the horrors will be much worse than detoxing alone. I loved the 'Humpty-Dumpty' Metaphor. Very fitting, very House-like

By the way, I think the authors made the right decision to keep Cuddy away, as long as House is not hallucination-free. Seeing her must be very destabilizing, as you showed it quite appropriate.

Thanks again, and I can hardly wait to read you new article.

Argh, no! I respect your decision not to go too far past canon, but that just wasn't enough and I didn't get the happy ending I want for House!! Still, nice job.