You have GOT to keep writing this! PLEASE! Its my birthday on tuesday, it could be a birthday present.

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Very cute. You could probably expand this into a couple more chapters and keep its charm. I think it would lose something if it's made too long though.

fabulous, please continue it!

God dammit WRITE MORE ! :D

This was really cute. I enjoyed the writing style you used here a lot. It's unique to the fandom. I wouldn't mind seeing a little bit more of this story.

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please with a cherry on top expland this! please !

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I enjoyed this immensely and thought it was adorable (And Edward is actually...well up until Breaking Dawn...the 104 year old virgin haha). I hope you add more to this story :-)

That was cute and entertaining! I loved the narrative and would definitely support this if you decided to extend it out a few more chapters.

Oh, that was adorable :D
Well, I think that no matter what you do with it, it will be great. I like it as a one-shot, and I think it could also be a great multi-chapter fic. So, good luck with whichever one you choose :)
Loved it :)

I'll read more. I'm somewhat Intrigued about this story. So if you were to continue. By all means do so.
Keep writting.
Motherduckatschool

this story was awesome! you should definately continue it and make edward and bella get to know each other and have sex. but try not to make it a lemon. also, i think it would be really stupid if they had sex in front of everyone, so please don't do that, but maybe they could go out on a date another time and then rent a hotel room.

i'm writing my first fanfic called The Dawn of Hope. it's a twilight fanfic and i'd love it if you would read it and leave a review. i only have the first chapter posted, but i will post more soon. (your best bet on finding my story would be to search "banditlover" for author.)

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banditlover

i tink u shuld continue very gud story i am a fan xx

This was hilarious and the most entertaining part of my day!

Edward sounded like such a girl (for lack of a better term) throughout this whole thing. Only at the end did he grow a set. lol

Virgin Edward is one of my favorites :) You did it amazingly. I really hope you continue this so I can see Prudeward try to lose his virtue.

This was rwally cute please continue! :D

fun...cute... loved it so much! more!